Great story, great ending.

Okay, this is so funny. I literally wrote a Baron/Brock story three days ago that will be published in a couple of weeks but I didn't see it coming it would be both of them in this either. Always knew it was Baron, but Brock was a surprise. And here I thought I'd found two men still not connected somehow in a story before. :-p

Somehow reading this with the prior chapter while the doctor says she can't figure out what on earth has been done to her is somewhat funny to me. I know you normally do it differently in USA but putting clips on when you sterilize a woman is a standard, normal way in Denmark. So for me, a doctor finding it hard to figure out, it just seems a bit comical.

I love these series, but there are some nagging continuity issues...like, Jon introduced Roman and Seth by their real life names to Sami in the second part, yet in this part he keeps his ring name...
Also, in first chapter of this third part, Keyla is mentioned to be on birth control, which she doesn't need obviously.
Also, Corbin's involvement is understood, however, Brock Lesnar? For a scripted match? Bullshit.

There are these details that i can't get out of my head...don't get me wrong, i loved this trilogy. I want to point out why was keyla on birth control in the first chapters when she knew she couldn't conceive
Also, why didnt u use Roman's real name (joe anoa'i) and seth rollins' too? Im guessing in the second part jon introduced them to sami by their real names...

I will not be extending Keyla and Jon's story past the trilogy. I think I ended their story on the right note. Honestly, I'm not big on writing about family life. I prefer this ending, so thank you to all who want this to be extended because you love the characters so much, but it's not happening. Love you all!

You should do another one with what babies and boys or girls they had and there names and the best yet if Jon and keyla take the big step of marriage before or after the baby!

Great stories just wondering are u gonna come back with there future like if dean and keyla get married sex of the baby and leading up to him and roman finally winning titles? Think it would be a hit! I really really enjoy ur dean fics u are very good writer

I know this is late. I just got around to reading this a day ago. But.. while I am saddened to see Jon and Keyla's story end.. I don't think it could've ended any better than it did. This is by far my top trilogy on here, and I can't wait to, hopefully, read anything you do in the future.

Thank you very much for writing everything leading up to this moment. It has been a hell of a ride! Ups and downs, with important lessons included. ((Hugs)) you have so earned a triple chocolate cheesecake... And you don't have to share...!

I am soo happy for the foursome, soon to be 7. Its wonderful that it could be wrapped up in a wonderful bow. Don't get me wrong, I was worried you were going to throw something dastardly into the mix, but you managed to reserve you twisted side and gave Keyla and Lennox the ending they deserved.

Its a great way to wrap it up as it feels like the reader has been on this journey with them from the very first story, wrestling through the indies with them both, so it does feel like a fitting conclusion.

I can't wait to see what you have planned next for us! xxx

Hate to see this end, but glad they got their happy ending.

This was actually the best story because at end you got both Lennox and Keyla pregnant from their love of their lives...thank God they live happily ever after

I absolutely love this story and will definitely miss the updates fro it but I will also read it over and over again as well.
Thank You!

I just wanted to congratulate you on your amazing journey. And I feel like I was part of that journey, at leasra little bit. I was a very faithful reader, always super happy when I saw a new update from you (even though I'm not really good with reviews ;-) ) You did an awesome job with this story! Hopefully you will soon write another. You are a very talented storyteller.