can U put new chapter(s) up or try to finish (to the brink and back) I WOULD LIKE TO KNOW THE END! PLEASE AND THANK YOU!

are you going to continue this story I will be very happy if you do

wow... just wow. Paul is not going to be battling anytime soon. Ash truly crushed it. I am surprised that he had made a new battle place for the indigo conference. I already love the name you gave it, The "Indigo Citadel" very snazzy. please keep up the good work.

Interesting story. I hope we see some ash/Serena moments soon!

i think the time skip should have been sonner also your story bio gives away everything :/

Please continue this story. Hahaha. It's nice to see fics about ash being a champion... And betrayal fics...

I didn’t expect Paul to stood so low, and did give up on Gliscor and release it at the same time. Still, I’m glad he got what he deserved for his poor sportsmanship. I hope the traitors don’t release some of their weak Pokémon in future chapters.

A great chapter here.

Wow I loved seeing ash kick Paul's butt again and get a pokemon two and I hope Paul goes away for a long time and I like ashs new indigo citadel

Yeah way to "prove" the traitors "wrong" and that he's "not" weak. Shove it up your a** you dips**t weak protagonist lover.

How's that? By training and STILL getting a hard time from them and his a** whooped? Weak protagonist loving idiot.

More plz

Wow good for ash sandbagging Paul like that and i hope he wins

That chapter was awesome. i can't wait for chapter 11

also amazing