A good story to read from first chapter to the last. You really captured Goku and Chi-Chi's relationship. I loved it all. Even the RadCha part. I never would have thought of or worked those two together, but now I'm interested. I am so glad that you didn't give a rewriting of Dragon Ball, but your added twist was good.

Awwwww krillin is THE nicest and sweetest person ever! I love this btw so good!

You are an amazing author my friend! Had this in my favorites for a few years and reread it. You really have an amazing handle on all aspects of the characterization and relationship of the OG couple. Thank you for sharing your beautiful stories with the world. I hope you know your readers felt the joy you had when writing this! Very beautiful indeed.

I'm low key pressed that he list his place cause of something so petty my man had years of hard work go for nothing cause he didn't just call the cops and wait. smh

What can I say about this wonderful and beautiful piece? You really are one of my favorite Gochi authors. The way you have with all these characters, not even only Goku and Chi-chi, but everyone else is amazing. You write them so well, you make them feel quite real, you make them faithful to their character and still make them so very real. I love it.
Agh, I feel you so much about suffering trauma after the Evolution disastrous movie, ufff. I would never wish to see Goku as a highschooler again, but since I knew you write this, I was sure it would be awesome and, oh, how right I was!

For real, though, I loved every single thing of this. I loved how you started it as something light, fluffy and heartwarming with the initial and innocent interactions between Goku and Chi-Chi, ‘cause of course, being them, their dynamic felt very natural. Though I guess Goku had a lot to do with it. Then, I also loved when you changed the fluffyness and ended up adding a lot more drama. I love drama, almost as much as angst, or probably even more.
I loved the idea of gangs, actually. I kinda have a soft spot for them since ever, but it’s my guilty pleasure, so shhh. Still, when the trap for Goku happened, I was beyond shocked. I was not expecting that from this story, at all. I actually felt my heart breaking when Goku’s promising future was shattered in such a cruel way. Man, I wished Chi-Chi would’ve done more than getting Tein out the ring. That bastard deserved more than jail... Heck, Launch is the one who actually did it so she deserved the worst.

And the end was perfect. Goku and his offspring are always good for getting in trouble xD I’m sure he and Gohan got a good scare, but that won’t stop them from doing what they want, eh? Now I wonder what was Chi-Chi reaction to that little adventure… or maybe it’s better if she does not know what happened or she would never allow Gohan get out of home again xD She is such a protective mother, I love her so much.
Something I really have to applause about this it’s the way you write Goku’s and Krillin friendship. I think is one of the most beautiful relationships there are in the series and I’ve noticed that a lot of authors brush it off and instead make Vegeta as Goku’s best friend and that… No, just no. It feels so wrong to me. Like, yeah, Vegeta is a good training partner or whatever, but Krillin is the best buddy there, so I just loved what you did with him here.
But anyway, I think I’ve rambled enough. Thanks for give us stories like this. People like me really appreciate your effort. Take care.

It was a divine reading until you came up with the gang and the shot part. You practically destroyed the mood of your own story and then tried to rebuild it.
Many things were out of reality in their entirety, from the shooting and the lack of consequences for the aggressors to Chichi moving with them (Goku and grampa). The last chapters you finished the fic only by commitment.

The scene of the main showdown was very good, but it was the only thing good in this second part. In the end, you stole his future from Goku and left him as a simple assistant or not even a coach could aspire. Chichi, you made her have excellent grades to achieve nothing in her life only marriage just like in canon. But there's was a difference from canon time so what its the point to write an AU if you only going to recreate the canon? And not even all the canon i don't remember lauch hurting Goku or Tein ask for her help in a fight. Extremely disappointing, the end. Adorable and fantastic start but a really basic end. oh well, you can not say that fics do not make us experience emotions good or bad.

I really enjoyed this story. The characterization of the main cast were great, especially Chi Chi and Goku. They were absolutely adorable! Oh and shout out to the hints of Raditz and Yamcha. Don't see that too often, but i do like it lol.

Anyways the writing was great, the fight scenes were great. The ending was pretty good too. I was really impressed with how you were able to weave the canon elements into the highschool setting without getting too ridiculous with it.

Thanks for writing this story.

I really liked it- it was pretty good considering it's a fan fic ;)
There's was a good balance of cringy and cute, though a lot of sexual stuff in there but what do you expect, right? But I had to admit, the biker gang plot wasn't all that good and the ending was a little disappointing. Overall, really easy to read, super cute- good job.

Another great fanfic, im just hooked with your stories and how you bring them across and how well you fall into their characters, im in awe, this fanfic was great and i couldnt stop reading, i have to admit it cut me deep and i really felt for Goku on many levels especially when he got shot :( but im glad Tien got his served reward, keep up the great work XD

I read it like a couple weeks ago and had it tabbed to my phone because I wanted to favorite it lol. I really liked it actually. Every now and then I always skim through the Goku and Chichi fanfics and let me tell you how happy I am to see new stories and I really really really liked how you portrayed Goku and Chichi! Like it was just soo good. I wanted more but it was perfect!

hello, just want to say thank you for writing this great Fanfic. I was looking something different for Gochi ship instead the normal canon. I really enjoy this. You didn't run far off the character. I really like chichi in this since she does not have enough screen time in the anime and especially I like the part she fights in the tournament. I was expecting you just gonna put the cliche Goku fight she keep cheering for him and The end but this was different. You have no idea I was so excited reading chi chi part. She fighting for Goku. Not that classic damsel in distress situation.
#Bestgirl right there mann !

anyway Thanksss again I really enjoy it 3

QmQ Your fic is like fresh air. I truly enjoyed this fic, I don't know. Sometime I feel like there should be more chapters. BUt it's conclusive. I think is because I don't want this story to end.
Lovely.

Been seeing this allll over tumblr ~
Just wanted to say there's a simpsons episode that reminded me of the tutoring scene when Homer and Marge were in HS, and it made me laugh because I thought of him being a little dim like Homer and ChiChi as feisty and smart as Marge xD

Anyway, just wanted to say that this is an adorable start and I can't wait to continue reading. Thank you for this. I adore fluff.

Ah shoot. My review lost a big chunk in the middle :/

Sorry for that.

It wasn't a good or bad.
I was really expecting so much for this story, maybe too much to be honest. Remember that used to like it a lot, enough to inspire me. It made me have emotional responses, giddyness, lots of happiness and great suspense, and it felt like everything was making sense. Then it was the shot; which until the day of today i don't understand or find necessary, don't get me wrong their moments together through that phase reforced their feelings, but to me it wore the story down a little bit. Also the grampa Gohan issue i had it coming.

You got me impresive in several chapters too, the one after the party, the one he touched her first time but mostly her fight with Tien. The latter got me excited again like and yhe beggining of the story. if i'm honest with you, in the end too, actually when She proposed to him, a funny cute unexpected twist. Even if the sex scene felt more mechanic than romantic and the unfairness in Gokú's -almost- future. At least Tien is in prison. All in all is a good fic.
I like it, but i don't love it. It felt good but no satisfying.

But after all, i'm thanking you. For share it, for finnish it as an artist and editor understand the amount of time and effort it takes. Hoping you won't find my review as a hate or bash, and i offended you and your work i apologize, because it was not my intention at all, and most importand hoping you won't hate me.

Stay amazing Reda, thank you for this ride. XX