Everyone... J-just applause. It was awesome. Congratulations for the autor! I really enjoyed how the narration was gently mixed with adventure, comedy and drama. I honestly wished there were more chapters, but , again, congratulations! Good luck in the future!

HA! This is awesome! I love it! is this going to be DemonStar (Mar'i x Damian)? I hope it will be. please update! ;) :)

Awesome! Please make more?

I am sad that this story is finished... But it was a really good story! Both parts!

Hahaha, That end was fun.
First~ I liked how you portrayed the relationship between father and daugther, Dick was so cute worrying about by Mar'i 3 and I really like the friendship between Damian and her and most when she was upset with her father. I have a crush with Jason and I look at him here how "Uncle Jason" was ... I don't know xD but was fun for me. The only thing that I expected was a kiss between Damian and Mar'i but it's ok xDD I like the fic as it is.
Thank you!

Loved the story. I was glad to have found a current story on a character I had just fallen in love with, thank you for writing it.
Sad that it finished, but satisfied with the ending.
It... um...
C-could you please write a fluffy epilogue of the apartment cleaning/moving-in/settling-in of the Mar'i and Damian... or the Gotham Squad in general. Please and with unicorn dust?
-John Victoria

Sorry to see it go, for sure! Keep writing, wherever the keyboard takes you. It doesn't matter if you are the only one reading it, keep writing. You're good.

I had a feeling this chapter would be the last one, but oh well... It ended right where it needed to end.
Now, great plan. Confronting Bruce is almost always better than letting him decide some things rs
Now there's two Batmen in town! Yay!
Also, loved how Mar'i got involved and worried about 'her friend' (haha)
Also, loved Dick putting her to help.
And Damian saying: "I know what she's doing Saturday" with his grin made me think he was flirting. But it might be just my imagination. hahaha
Loved this chapter, and the story.
Can't wait for more, Q. :)

xo

Pls tell me that there will be a squel. Pls I beg of you. If you do another chapter can you include that Mar'I and Domain are speaking Arabic and Colin is there and he ask hoe she know Arabic and she tell him I kissed him or something like that?

The story is great and I can't wait to read your next work. Thank for sharing it.

Oh my, what are those three planing? Cant wait

Now I'm curious.
But whatever Dick tought of doing, it must be good if made Dami smile/smirk like this haha
And I loooooooove that Mar'i tought of Damian when the girls were teasing her hahahaha s2

Cute guy, flashes of a tan skinned bark haired boy with light eyes, she wants to change the subject? hmm, I think I know who that was ;]. But this was a really good chapter

Awwwwwwwwwwwww
I love when Alfred puts everyone into their places
hahahahaha
Also loved the last chapters. Can't have enough of Damian and Mar'i! s2

How could they not know about their family's education and home? That's absurd!
No wonder they continue to explode in the presence of each other...
ps: good idea about the photo. That's the most moving & funny scene of this whole story (at least for me)

/snicker
Great chapter!