THAT WAS ADORABLE! Thank you for it was very good and I really enjoyed the flow and style Jasper and his draw to Alice is so cute! I wish you luck in life and if you ever come back to this story I'll be waiting but I realize life is busy! Good luck with everything!

It's really a pleasure to see it come together in this chapter. All her visions and his words culminate to this moment. It's lovely. I look forward to the next update.

Hey!
I really love this story so far!
Please update soon!
Keep up the good luck!

Alicia :)

P.S.: I’m sorry that your real life Jasper didn’t love you as much as book Jasper loves Alice. :(

I’ll be waiting for you, cause this so good it’s worth it. The writing, the storyline, this fanfiction’s only flaw is that it isn’t longer. I love how you’ve made the story yours while still respecting everyone’s personality and I’ll keep a close eye on any update - take your time, though. This review is for encouragement only, no additional pressure intended, I promise.

(Also, I hope this guys runs into a Carlisle Cullen that will cut is jewellery off nice and clean because cheating is such as shitting thing to do)

Probably the best AU I've read in forever.

It was a good chapter like everyone else,I'll wait for the next, I regret what is happening to you, take all the time to return.

12.
Chapter 12,
OW! fIRE Chan ged me forever then too late screaming gone nuts then had a vision then blacked outside with b est friends then found you there who turned you Felix rid of this nomad then sc reaming lost my and as all of then Executionof us with them bled as all of it bitten too far gone was with as all of it then Destroyedfrom life now was death blew up then with as all of scars was shredded from here then suddenly Popped frely burnt as into hugest flame within it's done once she rises she will b e trained with themblown from here good then myself died here then All of venom heaveiest doses then suddenly frrozen us/them blew freely from here Blazing freely then too late the both Alice oh god then help her then myself stirred within then screaming then suddenly with them nulled frely Snapped from here too late then m y own heart was decomissioned with their own woke up then suddenly as all of soun ds as many but too late was in my blood was Borg white v ery paler with Jurai blood eyes with a biggest make of a hugest bite in galactioc history was dead from the corpse with as all blacked outside thenboth brought here with a very deadliest bite right on the neck harder then ugh oh my GOD! a vision burst blastedfull throttle then suddenly had a power to see into the far future cursed by Apollo himself suddenly felt firest venom Alice you need blood crap then Blownfreely then couls n ot have a disease was healthier as a OX Wass fine oh m y head I Can't remember my life then as all of the very all animals was fast as the win d more powerful killed as all then then sen sed a hungriest cheetah my meal then then killed it then were as all drained had manners then were drain ed as all killed b y us/all then Blown freely then exploded then brought here reported she eats blood from animals has manners had created a fashion line they are extinct now too late myself had a big stomach no thank you I Am Vegetarian that is some bite on the neck uh oh she's the same ole gal ageless non-sick at all anymore healy for us/them blown freely then my own eyes were Fiery Yellow had very good m anners was very polite was more ceremonial was very formal remained alert but awaken was on milltary duty then nuked freely then lost the need then then with theirs resumed then blacked outside shattered from here brougght here no longer here then was with stored blood from fifty to around the world with last animals blown as all guards as all of them but too late blew up here I Was still healty as a horse not sick anymore was still fit but athletic but a strangest the young orphaned born from as all by now.

My puppy sends his condolences and thanks you for giving him an extra walk this morning even if his puppy mama was too busy reading the chapter to pay to much attention to what he was sniffing (sorry not sorry to the cute poodle we saw)

Best. Birthday. Present. Ever. Seriously, waking up and finding this update put the biggest smile on my face And OH MY GOD, it was worth the wait. Rosalie and Edward are going to kill her, and Jasper isn't drawn by her blood. I'm so excited, I need to read it again. (And I am so, so sorry about your shitty ex. I recommend ice cream and the Wonder Woman film.)

I look forward to more :)

This was a great chapter! I’m sorry that your ex iwas an ass! You take all the time you need! This will be here when you come back!

Im at the second chapter but so far i like ur story

You: updates
Me: *dies*

Sooooo, I have to admit I've never really read any twilight fanfic, but oh my god why didn't I, I'm so addicted already. I've really enjoyed reading this so far!

I can't wait for the for the confrontation between Alice and Jasper! Love your story