Reviews for The Stars of Origin
laurajustin chapter 11 . 6/4/2018
Great story! Can't wait for the next update!
dfwjkhguieqhfohduwfihljguhu chapter 10 . 7/3/2017
Dusk reminds me of Crowley from Supernatural, I just can't stop comparing them... it doesn't really help that I was just watching Supernatural XD
but I love the story
I really enjoy the way the plot seems to be heading
I have read a lot of stories where Lucy learns a completely new magic and I always find those kind of stupid, because it would take a lot of time to train
so I like the way you are building upon her original magic rather tham giving her a completely new one
I also really like the reason that she is leaving and going off on her own, its to find her keys, not for some bogus reason like Lisanna coming back and blah blah that would have never happened in the cannon
you are also really nailing Lucy's personality which is great
all in all this story is amazing so far and had a lot of potential
take time with the next chapter and make it just as good as this one!
Ganzademon chapter 10 . 7/3/2017
Can't wait for the next chapter and more please update soon Love this story
dfwjkhguieqhfohduwfihljguhu chapter 9 . 6/27/2017
you just gave me a reason to like Mondays
that is a feat
wait... feet or feat
idk
hopefully I used the right one
if you need any help or anything
I'm here
cuz this story is amazing
and I have no doubt that its going to get much better
don't worry if you mess up on the schedule
schedules are hard
you just gotta do your best
and come to me if you need motivation
I am a very odd person
and have odd things rattling around in my brain
that could possibly contribute to inspiration
...
I need more sleep
but instead I'm gonna go binge watch supernatural
dfwjkhguieqhfohduwfihljguhu chapter 8 . 6/27/2017
who is the red-head?
I feel like she's bad news
Lucy don't trust her
girls with red hair may be hot
but the book told Lucy not to trust anyone
(and gingers have no souls)
(luv the book btw)
dfwjkhguieqhfohduwfihljguhu chapter 7 . 6/27/2017
MOTIVATION
MOTIVATION
HAPPINESS
AND RAINBOWS
AND YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYY
PONIES
AND UNICORNS
MOTIVATION
...
...
...
...
is it working?
Ganzademon chapter 9 . 6/26/2017
Can't wait for the next chapter and more please update soon
Ganzademon chapter 8 . 6/20/2017
Can't wait for the next chapter and more please update soon
Ganzademon chapter 7 . 6/18/2017
Can't wait for the next chapter and more please update soon
dfwjkhguieqhfohduwfihljguhu chapter 6 . 6/16/2017
saaaaammmmmme lucy
you go girl
love ur story author-sama
its amazing
like wow
I read a story kinda like this, but I didn't really like it
so I was kinda unsure about whether or not I wanted to read your story
but I am glad I did
take your time with the next chapter and make it just as amazing as this one!
Ganzademon chapter 6 . 6/16/2017
Can't wait for the next chapter and more please update soon
LDmga13 chapter 5 . 4/18/2017
Oops. Accidentally hit the 'post review' button again... Don't worry it happens a lot to me... (2nd time today...)
Here's the rest of the review:
I love this! Awesome fic!
Thanks! :)
Guest chapter 5 . 4/18/2017
PLZ UPDATE SOON! I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT THE HELL HAPPENED TO THE CELESTIAL SPIRITS! AAAAAAHHH!
I love
Ganzademon chapter 5 . 10/25/2016
Can't wait for the next chapter and more
Ganzademon chapter 4 . 9/17/2016
Can't wait for the next chapter and more
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