Ok. From what I have read so far this is a pretty good story. Characters, setting and dialogue is very interesting though I feel there are things that can be improved on. For example in this chapter it was said by the cross dressing toad that his illusions would not work. That is false. Because it has been shown that the victim does not need chakra to be put in a genjutsu. Best example is when kabuto in the 2nd phase of the chunin exams used his genjutsu to put the audience to sleep. There was alot of civilians there and they was put under quite easily and they don't have chakra. An the toads do have a way to bypass lungs regeneration. A fire jutsu made specifically for people with a healing factor, Jiraiya's clone used it before in Boruto. An I am surprised that they have not introduced chakra to her, especially since it has been proven in canon that it can be given to other people. Hagoromo did it with his followers.

Huh, I never knew I needed a Taylor/Toad crossover until now. Kudos!

This review is going to be a little all over the place, so let me start by saying I really like this story and I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter. That being said, I feel like Lisa could buy herself a lot of goodwill from Greg if she shared her trigger story, considering its similarities to Greg's own. The problem is that she assumably doesn't know enough about Taylor or Greg's trigger situation to make that intuitive leap. Also, it's weird that Dinah didn't tell Taylor even what day Leviathan would be showing. As it is it would be days or weeks, like, I feel like Taylor's first question would be "when?" Because the timescale determines just how much she can put into pushing her training to the next level, also when does her dad need to get out of town, although I suppose it's possible that Taylor made the intuitive leap to the Endbringer drill being when the actual attack is going to happen since Dinah works for the Protectorate. I just feel that deserved a nod if it is the case, cause as it is I found it weirdly jarring that Taylor just thanked her and hung up without any further questions. Also also, I'm really hoping Taylor manages to get at least a little sage training in before the attack even if it's only a little bit.

Really? Greg triggered because Taylor did? D-r-o-p-p-e-d.

Hey wait a second, if this is post Naruto as hokage, then wouldnt gamakichi already be f’cking huge? He’d be at least as big as gamabunta

I thought he had a ringtone for her

Ok, Greg becoming a competent tinker. This us where you lost me.

Another weeb bullshit :/ i wish people can stop downplaying worm or wank anime shit.
Anyone can solo narushito verse

Hell, scion himself can solo entire anime shit.

Worm is totally superior to all shows.
Worm is the greastest!
Worm anime

I ship Taylor & Lily

I’ve been wondering ever since starting this fanfic, but I’m pretty sure that gamakichi is meant to be the same size as gamabunta after the war arc. Is this before that happens?

i like Hisako...

Hahahaha! Noir is a perfect name! She's even got the dark and gritty background to go with it! I hope she hams it up with her theme, too. :)

Unconfirmed Heroic Spirit and no one bats an eye.

Wonder who was behind the account.

That end statement from Taylor belongs on TVTropes.

I'm ready to bow down to the our new Toad Sage overlord. :D