not to be mean or anything but considering the alohamora is a spell used to unlock locks in the harry potter world it is a very weird name for a person

Hi, this is Felicity here. I really don't want to go out like that, so can you please update?

Now I'm not that familiar with the Maximum Ride fandom, but Wolfie, or whomever is narrating, seems not that interested in escaping, for someone who thought she was going to be tortured. Hagrid is huge, yes, but if he's carrying her, she should be within reach of his head. People normally claw, bite, or even tear at facial features when they think they're in danger. On top of that, she seems too healthy for someone who fell out of the sky while unconscious. Like if she hit the ground, she should be in pretty serious condition. I wouldn't be surprised if she woke up in the infirmary. Also, it's kind of cliche for someone to ask a random person where another person is, as if they know them by name. It's even weirder that someone would go out of their way to apologize to some stranger in a huge school. Actually, how the heck did none of them note the castle? Why is Wolfie's fist reaction "who are you people"? It's not like they were doing anything suspicious.

:) Please update soon!

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This is really cool. I hope you write another chapter soon. :)

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