This story has real potential. usually I don't like stories where Pitch gets something nice in his life, or where he becomes nice cause he's supposed to be the bad guy. But with a bit of proof reading I think this story will be great! Keep up the good work, I wanna see what happens.

THE DETAIL! I can't wait to see where you go with this! Good job!

Keep going girl! Loves it!

Ooh I see how this links to lullaby of the lost and gone now- clever a banshee does actually make more sense. Aww I've never seen sandy with a crush before so cute. But I wonder what Chloe is doing... Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm...

Yes girl! I can't wait for more!

Wow is this the story you were on about? It's really different to what I was expecting- in a good way! I can't wait to see how the rest of the story pans out, so far it's really intriguing

Hi there, skiewrites here. I've just read your story and I think I know what it going on. the problem is that, like you said in the summary, it is a bit humbled up and doesn't make a lot of sence. if you want, I could beta for your story, as you said you have already written a few chapters. Could you please message me back on my other account.