Hope isseai get a harem and the three female fallen angel are included. The reward for azele job his money and the three fallen has his maids and servant.

Your ideas are interesting, and some of them are fairly fresh and new for this fandom, so you've certainly got that going for you. The actual writing, on the other hand, could use quite a bit of work. Your spelling, grammar, word usage, formatting etc are all over the place; I think you would greatly benefit from finding a beta to proofread your work in the future.

OK let me just say that even though i adore our cannon Assia, I LOVE your twist on her character! This story is brilliant, well paced and is hopefully going to bloom beautifully for all of us salivating readers. The time all you authors put into your stories is greatly appreciated and i hope our reviews keep you motivated. Stay safe during this virus!

Really Disappointing

I thought you had given up on this story. I'm glad to see you are keeping it alive. Great chapter by the way, I didn't see the set up with Asia coming lol. Can't wait to see what you do next.

Good Chapter.

next

I'm really interested in this Asia, keep up the great work

Wonderful update and a bad mouth nun Asia that is a new one for me...I think I might like that

What the hell was that? You just turned our ever caring and loving Asia into a stupid punk.

Ok. Nice twist with Asia. I wonder where you're heading with this?

Work on the grammar

so either he dies and becomes a devil possible saves raynare (maybe other fallen ladies in the group) or they all die or he doesnt die stays a freelancer kills or saves possibly hired by rias or sirzechs to deal with riser

way too late to say this but fucking no you can't marry xenovia to an oc even if he died one she is a minor (same age as ise give or take so she be 17) and the oc most likely isnt a minor it illegal and they work for the church so its immoral against the rules as well as its wrong for minors to marry period especially to a legal adult
two she canon issei waifu in his harem so ntr ish (connotation not denotation besides the point) trash no bad it be fine if it was Griselda xenovia caretaker or just a random oc but you cant do that its wrong disgusting

beside that trash that i had to comment on as no one else did for some reason the story seem interesting

I really like this story so far I just hope the (what seems like) possessed Raynare doesn’t kill Issie can’t stand him being turned into a devil.