This is an amazing book! I can’t wait to see the rest! Are you planning on doing the Heroes of Olympus series too? If so, sweet!

How did the mom get through the barrier and GRAMMER

The Grammer makes me want to die

How is every time I want to read a Percy Jackson reincarnation story its this one first in Wattpad,quotev and now here
how I keep finding the same one its funny.

I lost all my brain cells reading the first three chapters of this story.

He can't lie for shit, even to save his own life. Can't say no to anyone and gets chain-jerked around like a puppy when under scrutiny. Doesn't uterlize his past life knowledge and experiences of the books/movies to prepare himself and learn how to defend himself. I mean, he had 12 years to prepare and join a dojo or something and learn martial arts.

He has done literally nothing but sit on his ass for 12 years.

The worst part: he made a binding oath and dumb promise on the Styx to stay loyal to the 'Gods'. Gods, as in plural! Meaning that he has to be loyal to every god in existence, the good gods, the evil gods, the especially evil gods.

That was the dumbest thing I've ever read. Literally. Jesus. Any of the evil gods can literally make him do anything and he can't disobey them. If they asked him to jump off a cliff, he has to jump of a bloody cliff. He is effectively a neutered and useless character now. I've never seen anything like this...this level of stupidity. No way to fix this now.

He made an unbreakable oath for all of eternity to essentially...be the ALL of the Gods lapdog. What a dumb turd!

There is something funny about this part of the text: I'm say smarter than other kids. Right now I'm practically can speak at full sentences.

I really love your story, you should pair Reiner with Percy or Lee

i must say really good stor and all but wh does he care about his mother?

wow this chapter.. i think everyone knows what i mean. none the less it was a great chapter.

pleaso no other oc that is important/for pairing but please let mc curse freely the curses are needed i think. it just feels wrong without cursing.

really nice story and the 'scene' with percy shooting a bow was legendary.

Update please

Dude this story is literally a rollercoaster of emotions and I freaking love it so much. I spent the entire day reading this and this is such a freaking amazing concept and I love Reiner and honestly cannot blame him for how he’s feeling. But like, don’t end the world, Reiner. Cause that’s not really good lol

But please update this soon because this story literally stabbed me in the heart with everything that’s happening and I neeeeeddddd to know how our boy Reiner is doing. Also I’m just saying it here, I ship Thalia and Reiner soo hard! They are literally perfect Omgosh. Also I didn’t like Zeus before this story but u successfully made me despise him so ya there u go.

Percy and Reiner’s bromance is also killing me and the angst in this story is like the icing on the cake. And since I read this all in one day, I could see the development of Reiner’s character (not a really good development since he’s kinda turning evil) and it’s done so freaking well.

Keep up the awesome work!

Hope u will update soon

You basically took 5 punches to the gut from a bulky beast just for one stab, not to mention you dropped your weapon twice