| Reviews for Hollowed Arc |
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   matheisbad123456789 chapter 6 . 8/5 Fucking Baraggan thinking he's hot shit imma send Aizen to beat his ass into next century |
| Malgrath chapter 23 . 6/12 Well damn... |
| Guest chapter 15 . 2/27 Slightly disappointed you didn't keep a bit of the mask like an Arrancar. |
| Guest chapter 4 . 1/5 KILLED IT |
| NotLeviathan chapter 23 . 12/23/2019 Though the ending was unsatisfying it was a hell of a ride. I can only hope that a sequel will come with the RWBY cast meeting our lovable cast of grimm... i never thought i would say that |
| silver.blast96 chapter 23 . 12/2/2019 What a shit story with a shit ending |
| hexxim chapter 23 . 11/27/2019 Clap clap clap clap wow... that all I can say. Hope you get to the next one soon. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/18/2019 So what's Jaune's Grimm appearance look like? Vasto Lorde Ichigo or White |
| NaughtyRWBY chapter 23 . 11/8/2019 8/10 rating. I loved the story and the build up. I wished we got a more proper resolution. I was really looking forward to Jaune returning home to be with his friends. I remember reading this along time ago, you had a part where Pyrrha was still alive and she was the one who had Jaune’s shield. I LOVED THAT IDEA SO MUCH. so it really bursted my bubble to hear you end the story without resolving things you had teased. I know it’s not fair to you, and I would never demand hints of you as an author and a person. But I really wish this story would of continued. |
| TalonIbnLaAhad chapter 23 . 11/8/2019 Man, found this ages ago, dropped it, then found it again, and damn do you not disappoint! It was fun, action packed, entertaining, and damn great right up to the end :) only constructive criticism I can offer is the end felt a little rushed with Salem's sudden entrance to the royal Royale as I've taken to calling it, but otherwise I'm thoroughly satisfied. Hoping to see Jaune's story continued, cause I know he pulled another fast one with his sword, and his shield still being out there (bet money that Pyrrha or Ruby has it) means he still has his soul bound to this mortal coil. Until then, I will keep an eye on the other stories you got here! Good luck, take care, and welcome back! |
| SirAttlich chapter 1 . 10/16/2019 For the love of God, do a frigin spellcheck. This is just unacceptable. |
| RobsterLobsterG chapter 23 . 10/9/2019 Brilliant story, great ending. Would like a conclusion of what the grimmlords do after though |
| hellfire45 chapter 23 . 9/27/2019 Good chapter and interesting ending shame he died through |
| juan3000222 chapter 23 . 9/23/2019 Thank you for the End. :) |
| Guest chapter 23 . 9/21/2019 Anti climatic abs boring |
