o.o I can't wrap my head around the thought of Jinn fathering a baby with Padme, especially having read your other stories. This'll be interesting.

I can't wait to read what's coming in next! D

why waste time on some lame OC when you could have simply used Siri Tachi, Duchess Satine or that girl he knew from before Qui gon took him as padawan who later died after the war in her planet?

Plenty of non story braking non mary sue females to have a the wife and mother of his future children.

I had to read from the beginning since I couldn't remember what had happened. I'm so glad you've updated again! Hopefully Obi-wan and Thrice make it back in time to bring Jinn back :) or, at least that's what I assume will happen.

The Blackswan Clan reminds me of both the Sheikah and the Gerudo from The Legend of Zelda series. Why not have Hyrule be on Lothal? Hyrule could be in ruins and the Jedi discover the Shrine of Resurection on the Great Plateau when a certain Hero awakens from a 100 year slumber within.

I want to like the story but its so jumbled its ridiculous

I love reading this story and I'm more interested in what happens to Jinn then Obiwan but I'm still interested in it so far and I'm curious on what happens next

That certainly was a twist. I wasn't expecting Kiya to show up. Can't wait to read the next chapter and see what Jinn will do to get Kiya back.

Anakin really needs to get over it and move on. But I suppose it wouldn't be him if he gave up so easily.

As usual, another good chapter. I eagerly await the next chapter. Hopefully there'll be some action coming up soon.

I thought the name blackwhatever was familiar. Damn it, it was that bullshit that, having looked at your profile, you wrote. I was almost interested until that ridiculous nonsense stepped into this. Despite my misgivings at giving up a story that isn't unreadable in grammar and spelling, it's tainted too badly for me to even consider it.

I'm not reviewing this on it's own merits, unfortunately, because I can't see the story, knowing that, behind the preestablished nonsense. Sorry.

I sense a love square happening soon XD. Great chapter as always! Can't wait to read the next update.

Oh, haven't really seen Satine pop up since your Love and War fic. I know she was mentioned in an earlier chapter, but I had wondered if she was gonna play a bigger role in this fic. Guess we're about to find out! As usual, I eagerly await your next chapter!

I'm happy to see another update! As usual, another good chapter. Hoping to see Thrice in the next! D

Muy bueno.

I just want to smack Obi-Wan right now. He's just gonna let her go like that!?

As usual, I eagerly await for the next chapter!

Muy bueno.