| Reviews for The Crooked Potters |
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Donout chapter 4 . 11/21/2018 Holy crap, this story is AMAZING! I LOVE post hogwarts Adult Harry, this story hits exactly what i crave about HPFF. Well written character and stories. Absolutly a shame this story doesnt get more attention. I found it on reddit, btw. I truly hope, that you find motivation to continue this! |
AutumnSouls chapter 11 . 3/7/2018 I take it this was abandoned? Shame. It'd be pretty funny to see Harry deal with a 14 year old "lesbian" hitting on him. |
FutureTrunkss chapter 11 . 3/7/2018 Tremendous story you have going here. |
ApteryxAustralis chapter 1 . 9/11/2017 Intriguing story. Could use a quick spelling review at times, but quite interesting. |
jeremiah123 chapter 11 . 10/5/2016 Great |
AcidCherry chapter 1 . 8/7/2016 This story doesn't get enough credit, your writing is captivating. I love your characters, especially Casper and Hamish. Looking forward to reading more! |
jeremiah123 chapter 10 . 8/3/2016 Great |
Strangelove.MD chapter 1 . 8/2/2016 What a waste of a chapter. |
Magnive chapter 9 . 8/2/2016 Huh. I don't understand why this story isn't more popular. I'm eagerly awaiting finding out just what happened with Harry, and how things will turn out between him and the extended Weasley clan, not to mention how he'll do as Headmaster. That said, there are a few things I figured I should mention. Chapter five and six seem to be the same, somehow. There's also often things that probably should have been explained. Some things are exciting as a mystery, such as what just happened six months ago, but other things should be clarified to the reader. For example, I assume that Artemis is the Muggle Studies Professor, and Alviss that of Defense Against the Dark Arts, but there's no reason to withhold that information to the reader, so you should probably work that in, somehow. |
jeremiah123 chapter 9 . 7/13/2016 Great |
jeremiah123 chapter 8 . 4/5/2016 great |
Psych0Geek chapter 7 . 1/28/2016 I like this fic, though I have no idea where this is going. What challenges will Harry face as the headmaster of Hogwarts? What exactly happened that reduced Harry to this state? Why haven't Ron, Hermione or Harry's sons appeared till now? How is Casper going to fit into the story? What is the scope of the story? Anyway, I'm interested. I especially liked the parts with Lily. There are a bunch of typos though; 'holyhead', 'hippogriff', 'McGonagall' are spelled incorrectly and there are incorrect uses of apostrophes throughout. A beta might help fix that. Also, some parts of this chapter didn't fit with the tone of this story at all. Humor can be added to stories without making characters react in a way that real people wouldn't. Both the job interview and the Artemis part of this chapter seem better suited to a crack fic than this one. |
Guest chapter 7 . 1/21/2016 great chapter keep it up |
jeremiah123 chapter 7 . 1/14/2016 great |
jeremiah123 chapter 6 . 1/2/2016 interesting story can't wait to read more |