Reviews for Short Fuse
Kkcats chapter 1 . 7/5
Nice. I like it.
Kitsune chapter 1 . 2/10
I love it.
I somehow thought that Peridot would like techno. But my favorite part is clearly where Atlantisite is raising / comedically annoying Pearl.
Would actually be cool if, at the point where Peridot contacted Yellow Diamond, Amethist came to her side, they became Atlantisite and then called her a Cloud, before she then ended the conversation with the words "We are out".

Now that I think about it, it would actually be nice if you were really going to continue with this scenario.
This is not supposed to be an order or something like that, just a suggestion.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/2/2018
OMNISENSE95:
You did not look the name up did you.
ASDFGHJKLLL chapter 1 . 10/30/2016
Words can't describe how perfect this fanfic is. Everyone's in character, and there's finally an OC that doesn't make me want to stab my eyes out! :DDD
MettaHeadCheese chapter 1 . 8/30/2016
This was an amazing read! I really hope this is what Peridot's first fusion is like!
poo chapter 1 . 8/29/2016
Aww! cute! and kinda sad
Sand-wolf579 chapter 1 . 8/5/2016
This story if full of so much awesomeness. It explains how Peridot feels about fusions, and why she feels that way. It has cool bonding between Peridot and Amethyst, and then a totally awesome fusion. And then we hit the feels, and I absolutely loved it.
The Keeper of Worlds chapter 1 . 7/22/2016
I would LOVE to see more of Atlantisite:-)
shadowfreak75 chapter 1 . 5/8/2016
I read this a while ago actually but only just decided to review it just now because I have zero control of my life lmao. ANYWAY! I REALLY REALLY REEEEAAAALLY LOVED THIS! it was just AAAAAHH incredible! this is that Good Shit that I love to read, please keep writing because if this was any indication of your true skill then you are absolutely incredible :D
carolinamartinez4321 chapter 1 . 4/11/2016
wau
MayDayGirl-Save-Our-Ships chapter 1 . 1/11/2016
Wow this was really good. I love the personality you gave Atlantisite. It was the perfect combination of Amethist and Peridot. She was so childlike it was perfect. With Amethyst's immaturity and Peridot's temper tantrums there would be no way that Atlantisite wouldn't act like a spoiled child. She was overconfident in her new found power and she wants to show off and prove everyone wrong. I loved her and I hope their fusion is like this in the real show.
101Asa chapter 1 . 1/10/2016
I must say, very good!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/4/2016
Ah! I LOVE IT!
OMNISENSE95 chapter 1 . 1/4/2016
Just one problem... there's no such thing as Atlantisite.
Juju007 chapter 1 . 1/4/2016
this is a great fusion story. I really like how you paired peridot and amethyst relationship in this and kinda left off about what peridot is going to do after everything's over. Also how Amethyst will feel about her leaving.
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