How could Padma share her view with Hermione without Harry? She is not bonded to her. This lack of information and details about the bond is hurting the story. Casually mentioning they shared everything in the form of memories and then an offhand comment that seems like they can block each other access easily. It just not bode well with me. Lack of discussion about Harry's childhood, details of his Hogwarts adventures are also in my mind. It's like a whole chapter of content that should have been shown is not present.

It's still enjoyable, but as a soulbond fic, it lacks most of the good things on bonding experience. It tells about them very shortly, showing tittle.

You know.. after a few Game of Thrones fics the phrase 'sister-wives' takes on a new meaning..

Le sigh... He is Lord Potter AND Lord Black. Two separate entities regardless of them being the same person. He would only be Lord Potter-Black if he COMBINED the families. Which by marrying one girl for each line no longer is a viable option. I don't know where all the authors keep doing this. Especially the ones that want to make him the heir to half the UK.

Titillating start. Well done.

Greetings to great writer,
This has a Good Beginning followed by GREAT story during middle and Yes you might agree the ending doesn't justify the great story although it was okay ending, you are good writer,.
SUGGESTIONS For ENDING
Tell how after so many years they have a very good looking boy and a dark girl which they name james and lily names doesn't matter much, and how they both grew in less detail and how they had problems in parenting naughty and stubborn children and followed by the marriage of their children and potter living old but satisfied life with old but brilliant ladies. The End.

Padma's nerves have her forgetting that desire potions only work on the unaware. including that one she gave Harry.

Love it

avra? what? Sorry, moron, but there is no killing curse that starts with 'avra'.

Thank you for a great story

Yet another well thought out well written story.

Neville and Daphne, I’ Never read that pairing before. I don’t mind it.

In Ginny’s speech to Harry and Hermione, she left our Percy and Charlie.

Clever way for the potions to be found

Great story.

I hope Harry has not forgotten Hedwig And Dobby.