| Reviews for Conquest |
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Guest chapter 6 . 7/27 You know Ravel isn't flat chest right? Her bust size is about 85 |
Sleepy chapter 10 . 5/25 Dude, this story is absolutely awesome! I love the action, every fight scene is a joy to read. And, the dialogue is hilarious and really shows each character’s personality. I read it all in one go because I just couldn’t put it down! I think the way you changed up the plot is brilliant! Thanks so much for writing this! |
DOS73 chapter 10 . 7/26/2018 Thank you for writing this story I quite enjoyed it and I look forward to reading the next instalment. Keep up the great work. |
MrSkills chapter 6 . 5/1/2018 Asia the cock blocker fuck! Get her outta here |
Guest chapter 5 . 5/1/2017 Still moving way too fast. You would have many more invested readers if you slowed the pacing down and fleshed things out more. The relationship between the characters feels rather flat all around but is still being pushed along with your own twist on the universe of Highschool DxD. I can't stop saying it enough: slow things the heck down! You can write, I see that but you just dilute the potential and concepts with nonstop rapid development. |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/1/2017 My only issue with this is that your pacing is bit too quick. Abuse victims tend not to open up so quickly, even to other abuse victims and especially not in an environment that is deemed unsafe like the open environment of a filled classroom. |
Plasma Dragon 312 chapter 10 . 1/16/2017 Aw some! |
Raskator chapter 10 . 10/13/2016 Dude you make the most awesome funny yet seriously action packed stories I give in my score a 99999/ 10 Raskator :) |
Yankee718 chapter 3 . 8/3/2016 I actually like this story it gets my attention and I like when it's different from the canon story |
General Esdeath chapter 10 . 3/5/2016 Yes please do a book 2, beautiful ending by the way. favorited |
Guest chapter 10 . 1/23/2016 mas novelas por favor |
War Historian-Freedom2134 chapter 10 . 1/22/2016 If Issei wants to, the (fictional) United Military Command is willing to give him 64 Hellstorm nukes(step up from tsar Bombas) to shove up Asteroth's asshole, without lube, then strap him onto a rocket to then be detonated in space. I FUCKING HATE ASTEROTH. HE MUST SUFFER PAIN BEYOND IMAGINING WITH NUKES SO POWERFUL NOT EVEN THE NOTHINGNESS THAT HOLDS DEAD ANGELS FALLEN AND DEVILS WOULD TAKE HIM. JIM, PREP THE NUKES. |
jugar38 chapter 10 . 1/21/2016 Great story, sad to see it go but very much looking forward to a next book. Also, wouldn't mind it being IsexRavel instead of a harem. Anyways, you do you and we'll just be glad that you give us something. Anyways, Love the story and keep up the great work! |
L.B.N chapter 10 . 1/21/2016 The chapter was amazing,Can't wait for the fight |
Dragon Rider 66 chapter 10 . 1/21/2016 good one man. well see you next time. |