Beautiful ending!

Loved the ending. “Can’t you two just be normal.”

I dunno, but I just feel like Rose’s outburst is just the slightest bit…over-the-top? Too much? Mountain-out-of-molehill-ness?
Because, I mean sure, her mom could’ve told her, but there was completely the chance that Hermione was worried about the same thing: how will my daughter react if I tell her I’m friendly with the father of the boy she hates?

Agh. Okay, so I don’t think it’s really ALICE’s fault. Sure, she probably shouldn’t have started dating Albus when she’s in love with James, but love is complicated and who knows? Maybe she thought she had gotten over James. It’s like…well, I don’t know what it’s like because I’ve never been in love, but I imagine it’s like she pushed it in the back of her mind and locked it in a box, then padlocked it, then stuffed it into a block of ice. And then put a couple hundred locks on that ice in a crisscrossing mess of chains and padlocks.

Er…question: did they use the spell to not get pregnant?

Aaw! She’s admitting it! Of course, admitting she loves him and then saying that they’re impossible isn’t the best possible course of action, but…at least it’s a step? Somewhere?

Also, I hate James and Alice. Jalice isn’t even close to the perfection that is Albuce.

Okay, that’s kind of a ridiculous moment to find out you love someone.

Lol: “Are you kidding me? How embarrassing!” Kids.

Loved the chapter, especially the ending: “And she almost, completely believed it.”
That ALMOST.

SHE TOTALLY LIKES HIM. THEY REALLY OUGHT TO STOP BEING SO STUBBORN!

Just imagine Draco and Hermione’s expressions when they realize that, far from just “getting along,” Scorpius and Rose are actually snogging their heads off.

Y’know, Rose really shouldn’t be so worried about how her parents will react to her and Scorpius. Parents can be surprising.

Ooh, i want that library!

Anyway, nice chapter. Scorpius is, for lack of a better word, an utter jerk, but it’s quite a well-written chapter.

I love the characterization and writing so far! Your use of language is excellent :)

I guess the sequel wasn’t actually posted or maybe posted somewhere else cause I couldn’t find it. I enjoyed the story but I think the ending was much too abrupt and some things were just left unfinished which is disappointing since overall I really liked the story

So no real closure for Alice and James? After all that build up? Hopefully it’s in the sequel at least

Best Scorose Schoolfic I have read in a while! Its so complete yet urging to read on more! Cant wait for sequel!