Good concept! Thanks for sharing this story. It can work pretty well to depict a happy ending via a short one-shot story like this. It's simpler than a lengthy "savefic" and can be just as effective too.

Oh...oh lord. *keels over from feels* And the fact I'm listening to "Everything's Alright" just made this fic more feels-inducing. I so freakin' love it though. More so when you just included one of my Adventure Time songs!

This is one of the only fanfics that I have read that shows Asriel after being saved by Frisk as what he would be: a traumatized child who needs as much support and help as possible. A great reading, thanks!

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