| Reviews for A Bane of Blood |
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  Annoyed chapter 11 . 11/27/2019 I don't really see the point of this story. Nothing changed from the original plot of ASoIaF. The Daenerys plotline remains unchanged, we know nothing about Westeros but I assume it remains unchanged as well if nobody knows about Jon being a Targ, the dead will still rise, etc. Nothing about this mattered or changed anything. It felt like a faithful rewriting "but Jon is her boytoy now." I felt like I could have reread the books instead of wasting my time with this. |
 mike3455 chapter 6 . 5/17/2019 who is this guy you are passing off as Jon? He has none of Jons characteristics at all, and refuses to actually analyze his actions. Even when he makes actual choices that drive the plot they happen off the page and we never really find out why they were made. Then the rest of the story he is just an observer. I see why this story has stopped. |
| AraelDranoth chapter 11 . 4/27/2019 Good stuff. For the love of all that is Westerosi tell me you haven't abandoned this story!? |
| AraelDranoth chapter 10 . 4/27/2019 Great stuff. Perfect amount of graphical material for the world in which the story is set. Keep up the good work! |
| AraelDranoth chapter 9 . 4/27/2019 There we go. It seems Jon was more of a bystander than having any sort of impact on events but sometimes that's the way it goes. |
| AraelDranoth chapter 8 . 4/27/2019 And now the great game begins. |
| AraelDranoth chapter 7 . 4/27/2019 Now we're getting to the really good stuff! |
| AraelDranoth chapter 6 . 4/27/2019 Is it wrong that I want Viserys to just trip on a rock and die? |
| AraelDranoth chapter 5 . 4/27/2019 Another great chapter. I think that I am beginning to run out of ways to compliment you. This story needs to keep going it is so good. |
| AraelDranoth chapter 4 . 4/27/2019 Oh man. It's getting better and better! Keep up the good work! |
| AraelDranoth chapter 3 . 4/27/2019 Another fantastic chapter and I'm giddy to keep on reading. I hope that you continue with this story I really do as it is done so well. |
| AraelDranoth chapter 2 . 4/27/2019 Brilliant. Absolutely brilliant writing and highly captivating. I think you've nailed the characters and settings perfectly and I found myself being able to picture the events happening as if the TV show were taking place. Well done and I am very keen to see where it goes next. |
| AraelDranoth chapter 1 . 4/27/2019 A very interesting start. The writing is near perfect and certainly intriguing though I hope we focus more on Jon now. I like that you wrote it from a peasant point of view (very unique) and so far you've done a bangup job of understanding all the characters. |
| Spiraling Fan 3128 chapter 11 . 1/14/2019 A pretty interesting story. Really hope it isn't abandoned. |
| ayamesasuke chapter 11 . 12/20/2018 Please update |
