Interesting how you showed off how all the characters are feeling about the growing situations, but might i suggest leveling whose POV you're changing to, as it may help prevent confusion? Granted all the characters involved are rather well defined and different, but there are possibilities for mix ups... just a thought though. Oh and cute scene at the end there with Chloe and Mindy!

Very interesting. A very big confession and a massive revelation about what Mindy does... Only downside to this chapter is that I was expecting more... Way more...

This sounds pretty good. I'll read it every now and then.

really liking this so far :) keep up the good work

Hm.. Very interesting way you're going about it here.. I like it! Poor Dave, though. Always getting his ass kicked all the time.

I'm really liking 8 year old Mindy. She's really badass yet innocent at the same time and the events are the opposite of how they really met

Yay Cathy and Chloe are in as well! Chloe is around Mindy's age yes?

Wonder if she'll ever admit it to dave

What happened with Marcus

Everything almost kills Dave

Ahhh one fine expansion here my friend :-) Little Dave and Mindy in an orphanage.

Mindy seems nicer here. Is it that or is it like that because their just kids?

Oh Dave...so innocent. Wait till you grow up

If ever a crossover of the universes would happen, these two would go holy crap (Holy shit for Mindy) when theu see their counterparts

Looking forward how this goes ;-)

Funny! Wonder how long it will be before Dave calls Mindy out on her blatant lie...

Still, I do wonder what their backgrounds are here. Other than what's stated in the summary...