This whole story is possibly the cutest and tensest (if that's even a word,) I've ever read and I'm loving every bit of it.

Welcome back! :D Congrats on getting the chapter done within the couple's week! Although I'm not sure if putting poor Kuzuryu through this should really be a celebration... this one hurt to read!

Hinata encouraging Kuzuryu to follow his dream of becoming a full fledged criminal was both heartwarming and amusing! And it really dropped some nice foreshadowing about the later conflict with Kirigiri about drawing a line between his two conflicting roles. I like that you're bringing the conflict out in this way, where there are boyfriend things he can't do while he's a cop - it's almost like a reversal of how I'd expect it to go. It's really interesting, and I love that I can see both Hinata's side and Kirigiri's side of the argument. That fight was really tense, and the aftermath of Hinata's counterattack was gutwrenching!

I have no idea what's going on with Mahiru, though... it sounds like you've completely reversed her role and Fuyuhiko's role in Natsumi's situation. You've definitely changed something, and I'm really interested to see how this whole thing plays out. This arc looks like it will be really exciting! Good luck with your writing - I hope you're able to work on more!

glad to see you're back! Would love to read your hogwarts au

Ooh, a chapter about the girls? It's like a Christmas present a month early! :D I really love the way you write Chiaki - you did a great job with showing how she views social interactions. It feels realistically difficult, which is a hard mark to hit. And I'm super intrigued by the glimpses of what Kirigiri has going on - so she's getting passed over for promotion? That's terrible - but probably about what I'd expect for a talented young woman in a male-dominated profession.
Sorry not to have as much to say as usual - RL is dictating my ability to write at the moment. But I definitely enjoyed this chapter a lot! This is a great look at a different angle for the winter trip mini arc! I already loved that part of the story, but this just makes it even better!

OMG it's a new chapter! This is extremely exciting and just made my Sunday 100% better! :D And I love the side stories that give a glimpse of what regular life is like for the characters, so that's extra fun!

The sweets story is incredibly cute! I absolutely love that Kuzuryu got so enraged by the insult to his favorite dessert. But I had to look them up and to be fair... *whispers so he can't hear* I think Andoh had a point. But I'm sure they taste delicious enough to make up for it! I also really enjoyed Hinata's reactions to Kuzuryu being adorable about sweets. The way he's so charmed by it is really sweet!

I'm continually astonished by how much you make me like Hanamura in this fic. Seriously, I couldn't stand him in the game, but here he's a source of on-point insights and great advice! His interference on the height/kissing issue (omg I love that issue so much by the way!) was both in character and very thoughtful. I'm glad Hinata has such a supportive friend! And then the follow up scene between Hinata and Kuzuryu was fantastic - that was a beautifully written kiss! Sometimes it's hard to write the step by step mechanics of kissing without draining away the romance and emotion, but you did a great job. And I just love that it had some of the genuine awkwardness and humor that a new couple would have as they found their way. That was a lovely story!

And of course I was very excited to see that Naegi was narrating the last story! :D Oh man, that was hilariously awkward for everyone and I just loved the whole thing! But shame on Mr. Cop and Mr. Criminal for not noticing the SECURITY CAMERA before deciding to make out! They're lucky it was Naegi and not literally anyone else in the city who caught them. The text messages in that scene were great - you completely captured the awkwardness of the situation.

This was a wonderful collection of stories, and a great day to celebrate your couple's holiday! :D I really enjoyed this!

I love this so so so much! It was an enjoyable read

Let the misunderstandings begin. I don't think I review your last halter sorry but that's because I just wanted to keep reading is all

Yes hinata! Go confess your love. Fuck complacency!

Now that hinata has learned what his feelings are through a unintentional game of gay chicken I can't wait to see what transpires

I appreciate your effort to translate things!

If you haven't realized by now I am binge reading your story and I love these two's interactions

Yes this is where thier relationship suddenly starts and I love how the first thing they have to confirm to each other can be summarized as no homo xD

I could really feel how tense that scene was! I don't how you do it but you sure know how to set the mood and tone!

I've only ever seen the gameplay of dangaronpa but I think you capture hinata's sort of self esteem issues very well. Self esteem as in his self image and identity. I know he had trouble with his self image in the game due to him not knowing jos talent or having his memories and after he learned he had no talent his perception of himself changed and he regarded himself a little lower. If something comes easily towards you without much thought that doesn't mean it's not right sometimes it best not to overthink things

I am so happy o find this fix since there aren't that many for this pairing! I'm don't know how to explain it but something about how you wrote it...I could really feel that pleasant hazy low key bone of the town hinata is in. And i think you portrayed them very well