Well that got dark...

Did you post a chapter from another story in here by mistake? Because this has shit to do with the rest of the story.

You should have said you don't own Teen Titans Go, since this fic has more in common with that show.

OoO really?! That went dark...But I liked it! Thanks for sharing :)

He killed himself, didn't he? Awesome story though.

wtf! it turned so... ugh. why?

I love the villain idea!

Oh the love, the love he has is to great. He cant live with out her.

He couldn't lie to his heart, He couldn't explain to it that life goes on.
He couldn't tell his heart that she be gone. So he wouldn't let it hurt.

Love it, you show that love can be a poison as much as a cure.
beastboy you can rest now buddy, you earned it. Dream of the one you love.

Oh man this is beautiful. thank you... Just thank you.

This is really dark in its depth, but it's also really in character. Great work with this, too.
As for that villain version, I say yes, go for it if you want. I am interested to see how that will go.

"Love of mine, someday you will die,
But I'll be close behind.
I'll follow you into the dark"
-Death Cab by Cutie
But I guess this song is better known. You can have so many ideas for stories just listening to their songs.
Anyway, you got the angst part right. I was hurting the first few chapters but this last chapter, it didn't end sad or happy. Strangely enough, the chapter ended hopeful as if someday, possibly in another life, they could be together. It did have a sort of closure. Not bad. It's honestly a very different tone for the ending that I didn't expect. I expected it to end all sad and depressing based on the song but it didn't. Nice
All in all, this left me oddly satisfied. Weird. But cool. I honestly have no other words. It left me quite speechless. So...uh...Keep up the good work! Ciao

OH MY GOD! OH MY GOD! OH MY GOD! ASDDLABLBLbxslnshcbsbslxsnelblwnaBblsbslbskbxksbhzksdnsbxbaskn! I can not handle this! I love the ending! I love it! I love the entire fanfic! So sad but so awesome! Keep writing! PEACE!

Oh man I needed to reread this one Is a wonderful set up love what you doing. Are you going to add more Titans POV, you can add a bad guys POV to that would be interesting. Or you going stair to Raven, or even Beast boy you have alot to work with here. Anyway this is awesome so keep at it.

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About the last chapter: I say go for it. I would like to read it, very much.
I also love how you keep everyone in character. That's really good.

This is really good. Are there going to be more chapters?