What a great fucking story! I’d love to read a sequel to this. Where they move in together, get married, have babies and all that good stuff..

Hello, how are you? I hope that you're alright and safe.

I found this story yesterday and I went to sleep after 7am because I couldn't stop reading it, today I came back to finish reading the chapters posted.

This story is really unique and have a different plot and development from every Vauseman story I read until now, so thank you so much for this work.

It was great see the development of the characters, the change in them and how Alex and Piper fought to get in this point of their life and relationship.

So thank you so much for this work and I'm glad that I found it!

Ah, this is still a favourite. I love the way you built this story. It's such a nice balance between storytelling and dialog, too. And your dialog is simply amazing. Hope you're good, just wanted to leave my thanks and admiration!

Ho very dark. Fortunatelly, nothing like that happened to Piper in the show. The way you talk about life in prison is interesting. Inmates are particularly cruals toward each other, it's dificult to imagine Litchfield women to do so horrible things. So, you are wright, things like that probably happened in prison unfortunately.

Hey, I made a little break but I'm so happy tu read this fic again, and I'm still impressed by the quality of your writing.
The way Piper reacts even if everything seams ok is very realistic. So good job!

Hey, your fic is whell writen. You are a very good author. The way you analyse character, particulary Piper is very interesting.
I'm sory for you if some of the reviews were rudes or criticing your work. Don't listen to them, your fic asks time and each chapeter is important and necessary.
Thanks to share it with us, and I will read it untile the last.

Amazing chapeter, the talk between Piper and Alex about prison was so well writen.

Hey, I don't know if you still writing fanfictions. But I like this one very much.
I'm not especialy a Vausman adict but your story make them very interesting. Your Piper particularly, she is less selfish and more friendly. And you are good writer. Your story looks like a novel. With Christmas approching, it's perfect. Thanks you to share your work!

Great story. What a rollercoaster ride

oh god this is more creepy than cute...

It's sooo long since I wrote this that I had to read it to find the Spanish Inquisition reference...so, yes I might need a history lesson to tell me all about the actual Spanish Inquisition. BUT, I'm English and the Spanish Inquisition is a well-known Monty Python sketch where they randomly burst through a wall and shout "Nobody expects the Spanish Inquisition!" to a bunch of people minding their own business in a restaurant, so it's become common parlance for it to be a turn of phrase for a barrage of questions you weren't prepared for. Didn't mean to offend anyone, the fact that it appeared in here at all where there was a reference to Spain was bad planning! Glad you're enjoying the story and see the funny side of my 'oops' moment ;)

I love your story, but seriously? Spanish Inquisition in Barcelona? It's crazy! You've to review the history. The Inquisition was programmed by Castilla, very far from Barcelona.. My ancestors and me We were born in Barcelona for hundreds of years. And this is not Spain, is Catalonia ;)

Woww this is my favorite chapter so far. I love the conversation they had about the kiss in this one

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Wow finally was able too read this story! Such a great story my heart broke for Piper she went through so much and loved how Alex was loving and caring towards her. You are a great writer! It was be awesome if you could write a sequel.