Amy is a damsel in distress

I love your story, I hope you are able to update again!

Pls continue

This is Pretty good so far. I like it. It’s different. Keep up the good work!

Please keep going please!

Omg I can’t wait fir more. I found this and I couldn’t put it down ! I’m really praying for more as soon as you can !

I love it!
Hope more more soon :)

OMG! I just found this awesome story and i'm totally charmed by it! Keep this ongoing, it's a masterpiece! I like your writing! You have talent! I hope you and your kid are well! Life is very tough but we must go on! Good luck and i wish you all the best!

fantastic chapter cant wait to see what amy thinks about yautja sex. very wam-bam-thank-you-mam. will there be a round 2

Cool! Is there another chapter for this story?

Hello! I almost never leave reviews but this story is absolutely fantastic! You ave captured all of the skills of the greatest writers..style
. Imagination...agnst.. romance...unexpected turns..all excellent! You rock and should publish!

Thanks for the update, I wonder how Amy will feel after her sexual escapade? Will she be pleased or disappointed? Kh'laz seemed to out of control to cater to Amy's needs. Hope to see more soon.

P.S. hope all goes well with the custody case.

I don't know how y'all do this I try to write something mature and get halfway through then just become a hot mess of second guessing and self-deprecation you make it look so easy and then you actually share it with the masses with no fear like how tf tell me your secrets anything mature I do write I just sit on and vow to never let see the light of day - sob - I got mad respect yo mad respect. If everyone was a big goob like me I wouldn't have porn to read like damn.

Anyway I guess what I'm saying is: oh look, an update! I actually read this when you posted it but I'm trash and didn't get around to reviewing till just now lmao oops. I'd blame work but I read and review all the time at work.

I think I saw the review you're talking about in your AN...the guest saying something about your character? Man it's like, what do you even mean by that? Like, yeah come at me with criticism but come at me with something meaningful lmao. Do you mean physically weak? Weak like she isn't fleshed out enough? Say what you mean! You're six chapters in and have like 1k characters to tell me what you think USE THEM.

And they're a guest so you can't like, PM them and ask to clarify. Aggravating! Someone left something like that on my shit and then blocked me so I had just go and revise blind lmao.

If it's not that review then you can just disregard that rant. I had to have this discussion with my husband the other night cuz he was all "hur I thought you wanted me to be honest dur" and I had to explain to him how concrit works lmao.

So far this review has little to do with the chapter whoops. I am a fan of the whole dynamic between the super violent alien that has to try in vain not to break the tiny human they want to bump uglies with. Shit's tight yo.

Kinda weird how she decided to celebrate that mighty kick by prying off his mask lmao. What a spaz. I like to imagine this super muscular dude reaching for her but she's on his back and his gains keep his arms from bending that far rofl.

Scratching their backs just be a chore...poor yautja...

I don't know what I'm talking about so I'll just go. Keep your chin up! I'm sure custody stuff is probably a killer.

Hola, gracias, ha sido emocionante, Ojalá puedas seguir. Ánimo. Gracias por tu tiempo.

Funny how I was just wondering about the next chapter and I get the email alert it’s up! Well worth the wait! Please don’t apologize. Life issues need to be addressed first. And stories are well written when the writer is well rounded with clarity. You do what’s best for you. I hope things get better!