Oh my god, thank you for bringing Zack back to her. This pairing is too angsty on the basis itself that I felt damn nervous as I scrolled down haha. But the feeling was good except I was hoping Zack would explain why he was late. I'm still too stuck up with how Aerith didnt know or in denial of his death in canon storyline. Anyway, yeah, a few grammatical errors here and there. I suggest you take a beta coz some errors are quite noticeable to me even when I'm not native myself. Otherwise, nice story. :)

I think it was a nice story about Aerith reuniting with Zack instead of him just never coming back from his last mission. I also like that it reads a little bit like a stream of consciousness narrative where Aerith is talking about her past memories of Zack and her present thoughts at the same time.

You mentioned in your author’s notes that you were worried about your grammar mistakes. I did notice a few, but they aren’t really all that bad. I’m not the best at grammar myself but I think if you pay more attention to your tenses, it would tighten up your story a lot more.

For example: Instead of “I smiled while I feel your arms” you should write “I smiled while I felt your arms.” ‘Smiled' is past tense so 'feel’ should also be past tense.

Another example is: “…searched my house in hopes that it’s not a dream” should be “…searched my house in hopes that it was not a dream.” Again, 'searched' is past tense so instead of 'it is,' you should write 'it was' for it to match.

I hope that helps :)