This is actually super pretty! Good job!

This is so beautiful...so sweet and so sad. I just love it. Especially the ending, which warmed my heart.

P.S.: Is this Kuroko/Momoi, or Aomine/Kuroko?

Kise and Kuroko, right? RIGHT?

Okay, this was quite good. I really liked the poem form of it, which gave it a mysterious and hazy type of feeling. However, since I'm bad at guessing games, I honestly can't tell what it was about or whose POV it was. :p I feel like I should know, but I can't place it! Ah, well, I've always been bad at those type of stuff.

Anyway, great job! I liked how you described the rain and the umbrellas and captured the emotions.