| Reviews for The Pursuit |
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   Syrinx2112 chapter 20 . 4/25/2019 PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY ITS SO GOOD ILL DIE IF I DONT FINISH IT. |
| SuddenEnd chapter 1 . 7/21/2018 plz continue this story I have been waiting for just about a year are all still interested in this story plz finish it plz! |
| Lucario-02 chapter 20 . 11/4/2017 It's been about just over a year with no update... I read all 19 chapters in 3 nights and I just want to say I am totally in love with this! I really X 100000000 want you to finish off this! |
| ArtisticFoxCat1 chapter 10 . 8/5/2017 plz write more so good need more |
| Guest chapter 20 . 6/11/2017 Well dang. I really love how dark and complex and everything this is! So beautiful! () You're an amzing writer! When I was reading The Girl in the Straw Hat, I cried at every update because I thought the story ended there haha..ha...;-; I wonder though, (in both this story and The Girl in the Straw Hat) could Ash and Serena really have a healthy reationship after...you know... all that? I mean, love is not the only part of a relationship... hm... We'll see, I guess. Well, hopefully you update soon... and hopefuly this stoy has a happy ending too... Even if it doesn't (and I don't think it will), I bet it will still be wonderful. |
| leafeons chapter 20 . 4/30/2017 New favourite story, I hope you'll update soon! The plot, writing, and character development is amazing. Loved it! |
| Guest chapter 20 . 4/13/2017 No no no this can't be the end! I need to know what happens next. Does Serena live? Are her and Ash reunited? Is Gary okay? Ahh I know it's been a few months, but please finish it! |
| Guest chapter 8 . 4/13/2017 Fic where the protagonists aren't OOC is rare and I'm loving it. I think you have a lot of skill to be able to keep them in character yet still go much deeper. I can hear their (English dub) voices in my head! This is the first fic of yours I'm reading but I'm crossing my fingers that there's more on your page ;) |
| Fanatic chapter 20 . 2/22/2017 Please Update Soon! I binge read this in about 4-5 hours and I'm so excited to see what happens next, don't keep me in suspense, Love the story and keep up the good work |
| AmourShipper318 chapter 1 . 2/7/2017 Please update |
| Andy chapter 1 . 1/26/2017 love this story, but r u still gonna update, bcuz i need to see an end to this! |
| Basket in a Nutcase chapter 1 . 11/28/2016 Welp He did it |
| aracya chapter 20 . 11/7/2016 So... I started reading this fanfic by luck, after stumbling with it on tumblr. In the second chapter I was already surprised by how amazing it was. Everything about it was perfect for me and I couldn't stop. Because of that, I stayed until 2 AM reading it until I finally arrived at the chapter 19 (the start of a war that makes me worry about fictional characters - I'm looking at you Cynthia 3). I think my favorite thing about this fanfic is how deep you go in the relationships and the characters - something that unfortunly lack in the anime and that I simply LOVE. Anyway, I'm really excited to the next chapters and to see more of your works. Oh wait, now I see that I'm also in love with another fanfic of yours. What a nice coincidence Well then, keep the awesome work 3 |
| AMOUR WORSHIPPER chapter 6 . 11/6/2016 NOW THAT'S THE KIND OF PLOT I WAS SEARCHING FOR! SOLGALEO & LUNALA TYING UP THE STRINGS WITH KALOS? AWESOME! |
| Q-A the Authoress chapter 20 . 10/29/2016 The final battle is about to begin. Keep on Writin' and Rockin' |
