OOOHH THIS IS REALLY GOOD! I really like how the emotions shared between Hux and Ren are portrayed, this is incredibly well written and I like how you've done it!

I really like this so far! Hope you continue!

Good job here.
I loved their rival relationship in the movie and I think you wrote that very well, showing what both of them thought.
Kylo's acting (punching the snow in anger) was a little cute and quite pathetic but I agree, it's not bad that he is no Darth Vader.

i like this a lot. Although from the title i thought it was going to be about something else entirely!

This is awesome (｡•́︿•̀｡) good job!

This is really good. You've captured their complex relationship :D keep up the good job!

Awesome! Loved it! Yeah, there's definitely no love lost between those two.

I loved it!
I personally really like the hux/ren dynamic, like rivals at school or even brothers. I think it was an awesome story and I'm working on a little hux thing myself...

Well, I am indifferent about Hux, but the concept is a good one! So keep writing these because id like to see where its going!