| Reviews for The first domino |
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   GuardianOfTheLastStar chapter 15 . 6/7/2017 Love this story. Please post the sequel soon. |
| Guest chapter 15 . 11/17/2016 What an ending! I hope you post your sequel soon. |
| Guest chapter 15 . 11/16/2016 Omggggg |
| Guest chapter 15 . 11/16/2016 French fan What is funny is that the children know oft before the adults |
| bjq chapter 15 . 11/17/2016 awesome ending. sequel please |
| bjq chapter 13 . 11/9/2016 AWESOME Just keeps getting better |
| EleleCrawford chapter 12 . 7/9/2016 Another great chapter, looking forward to the next one. |
| Guest chapter 12 . 7/8/2016 Love it! |
| bjq chapter 12 . 7/8/2016 Fabulous who is the mole what's his face talked to Mell about |
| 974lk chapter 12 . 7/8/2016 Great chapter here! I'm so glad to read a new part of your story! Thank you! |
| 50fanofmcgarrett chapter 12 . 7/8/2016 Love this chapter and I'm looking forward to the next chapter |
| Guest chapter 11 . 6/29/2016 Awww |
| bjq chapter 10 . 6/29/2016 fabs |
| 974lk chapter 10 . 6/16/2016 OOOOOH! Thanks god they found her before it was too late! Your story keeps me on the edge of my seat! It's really great! Thank you for sharing this new chapter! |
| Guest chapter 10 . 6/16/2016 Just keepa getting better. |
