Reviews for A Devil's Mind
Minecraft Guardiansaiyan chapter 11 . 3/31
Please make more in this universe...maybe after DMC 5 where Dante and Vergil help out the BAU while on vacation...
Unseen Watcher chapter 11 . 3/19/2018
Wow. As the flag bearer for this crossover category I have to say...you rule!
Great characterizations, storyline, and action! Thanks.
Stephanie0304 chapter 3 . 5/14/2017
I can just imagine the police force going
"Chief, Dante's left sand all over the place again."
"Damn it, how are we supposed to get rid of all the sand."
lol
RedKnight21 chapter 11 . 12/15/2016
I like the story, a little fast and nothing really big happened but it was still a good story.
Meech Macko chapter 11 . 5/30/2016
Nice ending!

I though Prentiss would be more affected like feeling guilt due to her past abortion and stuff, she could think like, if she is being marked for hell...

Either way it was a well crafted fic and a nice setting.

Any other DMC cross planned?

-Meech
Meech Macko chapter 10 . 5/12/2016
Seems its close to the end part.

The BAU guys have only noticed Nero and Dante being the devils but Trish is well hidden as her she does not have a significant true form that changes her appearance much, after all, she is crafted/made by Mundus and not really a true demon being.

Naturally, Dante fights like Vergil when serious or he'll just play around.

Soooo...who all saw Dante in his true form? Naturally that's gotta have a very paralyzing fearful effect. Only Dante has a significant true form that looks scary as hell. Nero's demon blood is mostly diluted and his appearance doesn't change much either.

They'll be regular church goers after this ordeal LOL. Reid would mostly have nightmares about it...

-Meech
Meech Macko chapter 9 . 4/25/2016
Nicely done on the fight scenes.

Reid naturally being too sharp must have noticed Dante's odd shadow not showing his illusion pretty boy human shape.

Assuming that the FBI paranormal division can only take on the lesser demons, They wouldn't want to take on the higher tier demon lords, naturally humans will have hard time against demons, especially higher tier classes which they may not survive.

So finally the demon boss would make his appearance in the next chap.

I can already see that after this horrifying ordeal, they'd be avid church goers...LOL.

See ya next chap!

-Meech
Coelectichi chapter 8 . 4/10/2016
Yay! Finally get time to just sit down and read and there's three new chapters for this story!

I really enjoyed Dante's introduction to the agents and Nero's brilliant. His arm must be a shock to see for the first time if you've never had a demonic encounter before.

I like the way you've made Reid sensitive/psychic, it works quite well with his character - especially with the implication of it being a shared gift with his mother.

I'm looking forward to the next update and thanks for such a great story
Umbra.Venator chapter 8 . 3/20/2016
Well next chapters going to be interesting :)
Guest chapter 8 . 3/19/2016
So the feds decided to follow them and tag along!

They'll have even more questions their brain wont comprehend when they see them in action!

It would be much cooler them doing swordplay than the mainstream guns.
Meech Macko chapter 8 . 3/18/2016
Nice intro!

Prentiss seemed more into not believing that Demons existing and such, and she does have a few skeletons in the closet. She'd be naturally going for ignoring this.

To Rossi, he might as well witnessed the fabled Excalibur sword as Rebellion pretty much looks like its crafted for godlike beings.

I guess Nero didn't hear that Dante had company, It was to expected of a supernatural being to possess supernatural senses. Maybe Nero was occupied with something else to notice and even Dante too seemed casual about their arrival...

I was expecting Dante to partially transform with anger (like when he was just before fighting Mundus, when his eyes turned red, just before fully transforming). His pretty boy human form already gives the humans a false sense of security...more like a wolf in sheep's clothing...

How are these feds going to file their report on this LOL?

They'll have plenty of questions like how that giant sword would stick to his back without a harness and his handguns already look like it weighs a ton...also how didn't Nero sprain his leg.

After this ordeal, the feds will be avid church goers ROFL.

See ya next chap!

-Meech
Guest chapter 7 . 3/17/2016
Why the hell is Dante so relaxed?

Add more supernatural stuff and your prologue already tells the Devils are beings that represent fear and shrouded in mystery.

Nero is not Human like Dante, even if his blood is diluted and as devils, they should have supernatural hearing ability and other senses to notice the arrival of the FBI and prepare for them.

This chap is a nice tease for their most awaited intro with the FBI humans meeting the real deal Devil.
Umbra.Venator chapter 7 . 3/17/2016
Cool chapter, looking forward to the meeting between devil and fbi
Meech Macko chapter 7 . 3/16/2016
Has Patty been caught on her way to to Lady's? Seems like it...

I wonder how Dante will react or will he check on Lady if she has reached? ...He seems oddly too relaxed...

Will the appearance of Nero complicates things? He would have to hide that arm of his in a sturdy sling and that his sliver hair will prompt the detectives on suspicion with Dante...they both got silver hair.

Knowing those human detectives are on the lookout for him...shouldn't he hide his standout weapons like that sword of his?

-Meech
Umbra.Venator chapter 6 . 3/15/2016
interesting so far :)
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