Sector Z is amazing! Cool story so far!

Very interesting! I'm curious how the two organizations will conflict (or ally) with one another, and you've set up another adventure for the KND with all the details fleshed out.
I wonder how, or if, Numbuh 1's time spent with the GKND will affect this should he return to Earth.

This is interesting so far. Definitely can't wait to read more!

p.s I'm working on a GKND fanfic, and if you would like to read it and let me know what you think of it in a review, I'd really appreciate it :)

While the premise of your story is interesting and that I have yet to determine what the new organization's goals are, please form new paragraphs every time there is a new speaker. You must note that big blocks of text make a story harder to read.