Tell her you love her, Elliot for God’s sake!

Great story! I hope you will write more

Well...damn. I knew it was only a matter of time before those two caved in. Fin only delayed the inevitable. Nice change of pace that it was Olivia who couldn't help herself.

Awww, such a sweet chapter. They didn't say all they wanted to say, but they said what needed to be said. They're both okay...for the moment.

Sooo happy they didn't rape her or force her into being a sex trafficking victim. And Elliot's finally there too. Yay! It's only taken me two years...lol.

Your writing is so good! I have been pulled completely in from the very beginning. Your story line is developing smoothly and it is making me feel along with the characters. I cannot wait to keep reading!

Loved this story. I loved the suspense about never knowing what was going to happen next.

Great story, nice happy ending

Oh no Olivia

Great, loving it to here

Trust Dean Porter to turn up

Oh no panic

Poor Olivia, I hope things work out

So happy for them. Badass Benson was in full swing

Good boy Elliott