I just cried because I have never loved anyone or any couple as much as I have loved Tony and Ziva and this is absolutely perfect, THIS is what I had been hoping season 11 and onwards would be. And now! Ziva is alive! They have a child, Tali, together! This warms my heart so much I had to leave a review to let you know how perfectly you captured their dynamics. Not many fics can quite get the zingy banter between them without it being cheesy, but this was just right. The story flowed perfectly. There was the right amount of angst and the right amount of light humor. I loved it more than words. I will probably read this to sleep every night until Tony and Ziva reunite on screen :)

This story is beautiful. If only things had really turned out this way. Great job!

*sigh* That was perfect.

Well written. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for posting.

Oh my goodness that was the sweetest thing in the world! If only this had really happened! You write fabulously!

This was lovely! I really enjoyed it.

This is beautiful please keep writing these stories.

What a beautiful piece. A perfectly lovely and plausible AU.

This is incredibly beautiful, and I really enjoyed travelling through their story.

This story is simply PERFECT.I miss Tiva and I like your story so DONE - nearly cried at the YOU and I hope you have a Happy New Year and get a job as an ncis script writer.!