Would love to see more of this story! You are a great writer and I hope you are having a happy new year.

I'm looking forward to your next chapter.
It's the best story l have ever seen in Fanfiction.

It's perfect. Go on.

hey. this is really good..do you plan on finishing it?

Really great chapter! Loving the flow of this story so much...Ren & Rey's conversation was everything I would LOVE to see happen & more. The way she is starting to see him as something more than a monster-I love it. The way the whole group interacts, his knights, Nomi, Finn, etc..was fascinating and so real. Love Finn & Rey's discussion at the end too, and am enjoying this "protective" side of Ren that Finn points out.

It was great to see Ren & his knights interacting at the beginning when they were eating-they seemed so "real" and human. And it's so cool that THEY are on the bandwagon of targeting and destroying Snoke! Lots of great stuff in this chapter, from Luke at the beginning to Rey & Kylo's standoff at the end..and now they have joined up, at least while they find a way out of the tunnel!

Fascinating Force Origin story Luke told Rey; I LOVED it & I could not imagine a better scenario for #8 than what you have here. Ben's story was so well-done and detailed, and addressed literally everything. Oh my, it is so tense, Ren trying to hide from Snoke's spies and get off the planet at the same time!

Oh my! I'm on the edge of my seat as to what will happen to Ren next. The Supreme Leader just dumped him out there! The history of the Force, the Chosen One, etc.. (or legends, as she warned) that Maz related to Rey was awesome! It was so detailed. Great chapter.

Oh dear..I am suspicious of Snoke sending Ren out all by himself on this secret mission..Nomi and Leia and Poe's conversation was really interesting. I liked the idea of Poe and Leia kind of butting heads; it gave it a different twist. Rey and Finn's meeting at the end was super cute; their exchanges and how they caught up with what each other had been up to were spot on! Hux and Ren's interaction was GREAT-loved every second of it. How Hux told him what he thought of him, Ren stopping the blaster bolt and everything. Awesome chapter!

SO. GOOD.

Oh my there is so much happening! So excited for the development of this story:) Ren being overpowered by the feelings of the prisoners at the beginning was very powerful; you could just feel how he was suffocating. Hux's character and his thoughts concerning Ren, "the delicate structure of a true military", and the "magic" of the Force are exactly what I would imagine them to be! These characters are awesome, so well done. Snoke was horrible & frightening at the end, just like he would be. I fear such a scenario before the movie trilogy is complete... and now Ren has seen into Snoke's mind and knows that he wants the scavenger girl!

I really like Nomi-she is so well fleshed-out and fits perfectly! Awesome insight into Leia, Luke and Rey's perspectives and inner thoughts too!

Nice to hear Luke tell Kylo he is stronger than he thinks. Loved Lando's appearance and the role he played here! Can't wait for Kylo to realize he'd better take Rey as his apprentice:)

I love the concept of Ben Kenobi (instead of Anakin or someone) appearing to Kylo! Hopefully he can get off this planet and confront Snoke and take him down. "Ben told me that, once": That was a powerful quote about the child starving for an ideal. Leia is ready to welcome Ben back, I know it..Rey would have to dig deep to find understanding and forgiveness, though.

I'm loving this! I can't wait to see what happens next, and I loving how Seth and Rey interacted with each other and I can't wait for more stuff like that!