I just found this story and read it in one sitting. I love it - please continue!

Oooh, such underlying tension. Well done. Well worth the wait. Keep it up.

Love it more soon PLEASE ;)

Awesome work. Love it. Well done.

Oooh, the plot thickens. I love it.

I love it! Well done! More soon please!

thank you for the chapter, I enjoyed it, it was kinda short but any length is better than none. Love that Parker tried to comfort Eliot.

Still enjoying the story. Seems Eliot and Grace had formed a very strong friendship in the past.

Enjoyed this chapter and Grace sure did give Eliot a headache while he was persuing her. That could be a story by it self.

Thank you for another chapter so soon. Love that Grace got over on Eliot by drugging her own food. He didn't see that one coming. Eliot and Grace were an item at one time I bet. Either that or he saved her life. OK. which one is it? Just a little hint, please? Are they waiting for the General's family to be safe before they go to San Lorenzoor is Gracie going to end taking care of the problem? Ok, so maybe I need another chapter or two.

Ok that left me with more questions. Just when I think I will finally find out they became so close and why she always seems to spare Eliot from killing anymore, BOOM, you change directions! So with that said I REALLY need more chapters please?

hard to, but I will wait for more! Poor Nate, shouldn't make Eliot mad.

loving all your stories. hope they all get an ending soon, and real life doesnt cause too many problems to slow you down.