Hi! I’m aware this trilogy is completed and I love your take on this OC and the plot seems good so far but I’m just not able to make it past the grammatical errors. I would definitely love to beta the trilogy for you and fix any errors that I may find if that’s something you’d be interested in. Just a more polished version of your original work :) let me know!

Awwww, Poe and Neyli are so cute! I’m a Poe fangirl, so it makes me so happy to see him in love with a girl!

Who would you like to portray Neyli. If you could make a movie of both this and the sequel fanfiction that is.

Actually Kylo Ren isn't a Jedi but a part of a whole new group who call themselves the Knights Of Ren who represent the mystical side of the First Order.

Hey, I know you've finished this story, but it may be worth going back and editing it as there are many grammatical errors. I like the concept of this story and I did want to finish It, but I couldn't get past Chapter 4. I'll happily come back to it if it was edited, but for now I'll have to leave it. Sorry

Lovely story! I think that Neyli is a bit of a Mary Sue at times, to be honest. But overall, this is a great piece you’ve got here!

Cool story!

YES PLEASEEE! I love this story soooo much

Yeah:))

yes. yes please!

Sure you have to!

Yes please, that would be amazing!

yes make a part two! this story is so awesome and good!

Wonderful!
Update immediately, please!

i loved it! so sweet and cute!