Hopefully we get another update but unlikely however gotta try to be positive.

My only problem with this chapter is that your still oversexualizing Soma I was able to kind of ignore it in the last couple chapter but now it's really starting to get annoying imo.

I'm still really liking this fic I got one problem with this chapter though and it's kinda nit picky so take it with a grain of salt if you ever read this (which you probably won't.)

I find it incredibly unbelievable that neither of them remembers Soma I mean I guess for Alice i can kinda let it slide cause she's half asleep when they meet up but for Erina there's no excuse like that that you could make hell if nothing else that scar she gave should of been a dead giveaway.

I mean I get that they both only spent one day with his but that one day was apparently incredibly important to both Erina and Alice and your gonna tell me neither of them recognize him I'm sorry but that's a bit of a stretch at least imo.

I really enjoyed this chapter a bit of a critique though (and for the record I'm kinda new to this site so if this is because of some stupid censors this site has ignore me but) for the lemon scene I think I know what you mean when you say "juice box" but I don't really understand why you don't just say vagina or pussy since I'm relatively sure that's what your talking about it just takes me out of the moment when I'm reading lemon stuff in fanfics and writers use weird terminology to describe the character private parts Idk just my opinion.

I ship Soma more with Erina in the canon story but in this (so far at least) I ship him with Alice moreso Idk why exactly I just read the part of chapter 1 where they meet and spend the day together and my heart melts from the cuteness overload I get when reading it.

How come there havent been any more chapters for 3 years?

Noooooo, don't ruin their relationship Erina!

Wow. What a chapter I mean I don't think that even Azami would go to those lengths. Buuuuut it was still fun to read (even though I'm more of a Souma x Alice guy)

that... was very unexpected

I actually liked the chapter and enjoyed it. Also the way you wrote Souma's character is interesting. It's nice to see a different personality then the usual dimwitted baka. It's a nice change of pace.

I look forward to reading your other fanfictions as this one is really good!

Answering your question at the beginning (I know I am very late answering this and it will have no effect and you probably wont even read this but idc) You should probably start with Alice

Now that took an unexpected turn

IS the way he got that scar canon?

Noice