you should do one with Naruto Mei Anko and Samui

Well that was pretty cool not a fan of Hinata at all so pretty much skipped her parts but they all got some Naruto action so that's all good

HOTT! Keep going!

I know this fanfic is from 2015, but I really wanted to comment...

All I'm gonna say is I stumbled upon your 3 certain fanfics (including this one) by looking for KinGin-Brothers related fanfics as I am a big fan of them and I actually enjoyed reading all of these.
Since I've read Naruho's hentai fan-mangas I reconized some bits, while I admit I do not like rape stories or that Naruho mainly only uses 4 characters (Naruto, Hinata, Sakura and Tsunade) so I actually liked how Naruto kicked that one guy's ass and that you added more characters.
The bit with Ginkaku being accused of being the father of several ''children'' got me good. XD

What I have to critic is that the sex/hentai parts in your fanfictions often take WAY too long in my opinion, even if they are written well. Also that the scene where Ginkaku and Anko get it on was skipped, while Naruto gets an orgy with about 5 girls...
But I still prefer that over a rape story.

As I myself (and surprisingly many others) ship Samui with Ginkaku and the brothers get not much appreaciation, if you use them again in a story why not give them a pretty romantic one for themself? :) But I definitly love how you made Kinkaku, Ginkaku and Naruto brothers, I always find that so cute. XD

Keep up your stories, I really like them. You inspired me that I might try to write a lemon on my own.

Oh btw, fanart for one of your stories I made: /dbpp5st

that was good keep the chapters coming

i didn't like it ... I LOVED IT 5 STARS ON YELP WOULD READ AGAIN

that was good keep the chapters coming

It was alright, keep up the great work

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This is going in my favs.

Loved it bro. And man I just say you are evil for doing that to Ginkaku. Poor guy. It's funnier then he'll to see how he reacts to that kind of stuff. It sounds like something most single men would want to do.

I'm wondering though, have you heard of the anime Nadia: The Secret of Blue Water? How about a Naruto x Nadia lemon.

If not, may I suggest a Naruto x Bleach crossover lemons.

Damn so no kushina
Please continue
CAn you make a Rin Nohara and naruto lemon and naruto and mikoto lemon
Can't wait for more lemons and stories

Great to you working hard my brother. also I had a suggestion H-entai that you should add to the Kuroinu/Catue story you plan on writing. Go to H-entai Stream (That name is together and I put the dash between H and Entai cause it gets starred.) look up Buta hime.(It's a really long so I shortened it.) and add the two girls in the story. message me back to tell me what you think. thank's.

What an amazing harem one shot story in honor of Hinata's birthday

Very nice story you wrote! Remaking doujin is very interesting!