Oh my gosh this story is so intriguing! Although you've made Luke slightly different than in the movie, I like the changes and hope you continue to develop his character. Please please please finish this story! Thanks!

Great beginning, the dream format the young and old, friendship and pain intertwined and overlapping. This is my SW series now because I trust Alydia to treat these characters and their stories with intelligence and understanding and spare me the frustration that too often accompanies encounters with the "official" version.

Please do go seek her out at Patreon and on Pinterest. Her stories are wonderful, full of surprises and beautifully written. Don't miss her "Lokistone" stories on fanfiction, or the beautiful fairy tales, mysteries, and adventures at Patreon. "Glass" and "Scales" and the delightful "Pendywick" saga, and there is a new one in the works, "Tide", that some of you are going to especially love.

Fantastic beginning! Hope you are able to finish this. Haven't seen The Last Jedi yet, but it sounds terrible... Your characterization of Luke seems so much more true to his character than what Disney has done... anyway, great writing! Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!

This is so wonderful! You've kept everyone's character very accurate and I love all the bitter-sweetness memories. I hope you continue this beautiful story!

This is great stuff so far; I can see the actors performing it in my mind. You've done all the characters justice so far; keep on writing!

This is really interesting, full of care and consideration. I really like your natural style for this fic. Would you ever continue? Why did you discontinue? It serves well as a three part drabble for sure . . . but I bet it could go even deeper into the hearts of these amazing characters! ;) This is some of the best I've found by far. . . of the 'episode 8 speculation' stories!

This story is AWESOME!

There were questions in my mind at the confusing jump between the meet in the hangar when Luke and Han were young, to the commentary about the pain of loosing Kylo Ren for Han (a much later time in his life) but it all made sense when it was disclosed everything was in dream format.

There is great capture on inner emotions with this and it's a wonderful beginning to grip readers to read on!

I just stumbled upon this story and I am very intrigued! I like how you wrote Luke. I hope you update soon! Please keep writing the story!

update!

This as awesome! Star Wars is one of my favorite things ever... So I really appreciated reading this. Some feedback is to make sure that when snoke is talking he sounds... Well, like him. The last paragraph where he was speaking sounded just a bit choppy. The only other thing I would suggest is to make Kylo ren's thoughts sound maybe a bit more sinister. It is still early in the story, and you have not developed the characters a lot, so this isn't much of a problem, just a preference. Since the movie had nothing from his perspective, his personality is really your choice, but I imagine him as having less human emotion in his thoughts and more evil, I guess.

this story promises to be very interesting :D
I hope you continue updating it! :)

Please please please continue! You are my favorite author on , I read almost every your work from Heroes to Loki and you always take the story where I want it to go in my fantasies. So please finish this one :-)

Well... that just broke my heart. T_T

Oh, wonderful so far, thanks for sharing!
I loved the dynamic between Kylo and Rey in the movie. Clearly, Kylo was very intrigued by Rey from the very start - the almost gentle way he interrogated her, the way he was sparing her and merely probing her skill in the lightsaber battle (which he most likely regretted later)... their storyline really captured me, I must say. And I just knew you'd write a fanfic about it. And yay, here it is, and very well written! I enjoyed the first three chapters very much, and I think I do not have to stress how much I'm looking forward to read more. I'm curious about your take on their relationship! (The way I see it they are not related, so I tend to ship them, but if it turns out they're family, well, I'm not entirely against it, either.)