Still waiting for Part 2...

That was amazing I love this! The way they got togather in the end and that kiss... perfect. I love how much effort you put in this. Thank you ,for sharing this amazing story. I can’t wait to read part 2.

That interaction between itachi and raikage was done so well! You portrayed it really well.

I love how sasuke is possessive of itachi. He’s so cute and adorable! And yes I love the relationships you developed in this story and gave each character their own justice.

I love itachi and sasuke’s interactions and their lifestyle. And yes Tsunade and sasuke’s interactions was funny and cute. This is just better and better.

Yes I love this. How you started off the chapter and showed itachi’s pov. And how he is without his memories. Love love. Love it! This is written so well I’m amazed like wow.

I loved that end scene! And how you wrote this whole chapter.

I'm falling in love because of you, babeeeeee!

That last part with Itachi and Sasuke, just standing there, while Itachi was "pouring his heart out" kinda gave me a vibe from that scene in 'The Sound Of Music'.

"For here you are standing here loving me
Whether or not you should
So somewhere in my youth or childhood
I must have done something good"

I now that wasn't what you were aiming for, but I was just reminded XD

I really love this story, and your writing, and I can't await to see the second part when you decide to write it!

I come back to find this thing halfway done. Damn. With college being... college I sorta forgot about this story and just happened to stumble upon it again in my bookmarks bar. Decided to read through the whole thing again from the start. And... wow. The sheer amount of introspective feelings and thoughts in your writing style always blows me away. You convey so much information will the littlest words.

I look forward to part 2!

I love Kakashi's characterization, how he cares about Sasuke and respects his wish while coming up with less traumatic version of Itachi's past and how he understands Itachi's sacrifice by remembering Obito. Another amazing part of this chapter is Sasuke's reaction and state of mind when Itachi's ANBU outfit brings back horrible memories (aah poor Itachi doesn't understand why he suddenly got so scared) and how his past and present sides are afraid of the same thing. Also, that ending is perfect, I love it!

Ooh, I love interaction between Itachi and Raikage, it's so well written. I also like your characterization of Kakashi and Tsunade here.
Itachi's affection for his brother deeply touched me, he sees him as pure soul, not wanting to satisfy his own desires he considers impure. I'm also touched by Itachi's resolve to accept any punishment from Raikage, but clearly stating that he won't let anyone harm Sasuke.

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Please don't kill one of them off in part 2 ;_;

Another fantastic chapter!
With Itachi finally (completely) giving in to his deep feelings for his brother :3
I found awesome and extremely realistic the way you made Sasuke react to the sight of Itachi in his Anbu suit, and even more so the little affectionate gestures Itachi used to calm him down.
Also the ending was really sweet, giving the brothers the peace and the time together they deserve.
I am SO looking forward to the "second season" of this amazing story, and to read more of the brothers' ...ehm alone time together hehe :blushes:
As always, great work! ;)