You're my favorite Jerza author

Rewrites are a satisfying thing, especially when they go well. You did a good job on this and now the nagging monster can rest. Laxus, of course, was my favourite part, I can’t help it, I’m a lightning slut. I’m having a difficult time imagining Jellal in that company without him parting Bickslow of his head, haha.
Anyway, as I said, awesome stuff!

Gasp. Ultear, my manipulative, evil love, nooo. It had to be done, I know.
And Jellal! You’re bad at not getting hurt. One more chapter.

Lady is such a lovely horse. She didn't appear much in the fic but she has my heart. xD

Laxus coment about Erza's lack of the right "equipment" made my day. xDDD

Miraxus hint is really aprecciated. *heart*

The last coment Laxus says to Jellal... xDDDDD I love the mental scene. xDDDDDD

Travels are a pain in the ass most of the times but at least now he is with the love of his life. qwq I'm crying... Bath scenes are now in my fave coffetishcof list 7v7r

So happy to know Lady is with them. I imagine both of them thinking about his samurai and sharing the longing xD So cute...

They can say whatever they want but using the titles "samurai" and "princess" between them is just shameless foreplay. xDDDD

BABY JERZA... QwQ Ay, mis amores... Love the words Erza says to Jellal about love and the way it fix the broken parts in him. QwQ

ASSSSDAFAAAAHSHSHAHHSHSH *STUPID SMILE*

I think Lady will be so calm and sumise with the baby of babies. The scene in my mind melt my heart. ASDASDAFFAASDFAAFF...

Love the story!

Thanks for writing!

Forgot to say in the other review that the Raijinshuu interactions were on point *hearts*

Jellal moves and fights with the force of his will and heart. He is so injured. QwQ

The meaning of love Ultear has is sick. It was better for Jellal that everything they have collapsed.

One of my favs scenes in this fics has to be Erza using that sword against Ultear. Wish I have drawing skill to make a fanart from that part. xd I did an edit for this fic, thou.

Love when he say that Erza didn't hurt him even so she almost leave him without breath. XD So cute.

Oh my babies... they are apart again. QwQ

My poor samurai. He feels helpless but he is only a human qwq Ultear is a crazy woman who took advantage of his good heart... Erza is in danger... Dx I'm dying... I need the raijinshuu secret drug and the next chapter.

Bickslow is a crazy fool. He has personality, though, and I appreciate that greatly. He’s likely one of my favourite characters? Because he’s totally insane.
Ultear. She’s glorious. I know she’s the bad guy, but as I have a penchant for insanity, I also have a penchant for bad.
Looking forward to the next one.

This was nice. The scene in the springs was very nicely done. I like Erza’s confidence here—it’s much easier to write girls that know what they want and much better to read about them, too. She’s no-nonsense and forward, just perfect.

I just read the last review I left and saw that the Fanfiction App mess up my review. Dx The review was not complete and was a disaster... I feel so embarrased right now xDD I'll try again with the app... just one more time...

("I don't desire your horse, Jellal. Only the affection in your voice when you speak of was direct hit. I like it! Way to go, princess!

("Forgive me for spying, Jellal, but I have seen all of you in the moonlight, and you are not in pieces.")

I bet on that. 7v7r Everything was at the right place.

The princess hit him in all the right ways and the wall was destroy. ADDAAFFAGSGSHSHJS. Your just a mortal Jellal, we all know you will not resist any longer. xD

(Both the pleasure and the pain were part of the bargain they'd agreed to before she ever invadeda his space and pressed her lips to his.)

My favorite phrase of this chapter.

The part af Jellal telling he is broken reminds wabi-sabi philosophy and a japanese tecnique know as kintsugi, that japanese practice that highlights and enhances the breaks thus adding value to the broken object, they repair the object with gold and silver in order to create a beutiful and unique item thanks to that cracks (scars). Is a way to say that scars make us who we are and that we do not have to be ashame for that scars, we should be proud, because that was made us who we are right now. I don't now, I just think is beautiful. xD

Thanks for writing!

*cross my finger sending this*

I’m so glad it was Ultear that did the damage. Erza is perceptive; i enjoy that, as well.

I like that this is being told from Jellal’s POV. It’s a refreshing step away from most storytelling—you know, usually, it’s the princess that gets the voice.

Another beautiful update!

((He'd woken that morning to find his fingers tangled in her hairLong live to the fetish! It is healthy to have a fetish about a fictional character fetish? xD I don't know, but I have it.

Jellal's doubts and fears always hurt my heart but at the same time I want to shake him from the shoulders for him to understands he deserves been happy qwq I love him so much!

((His skin prickled when he heard her
voice for the first time that day.
"I require a bath, S part I have an observation, it says it was the first time he heard her voice in that day, but in the main door she speaks about to knock the door. Or... maybe I did not understand. xD

((He hadn't meant for her to catch him performing the misogi, but the damage was she watch EVERYTHING she will not be that damage (?) xD Nice view, indeed.

The name part made me sigh... Awww~ I just love it.

Oh, Jellal... there's nothing you can do about... The princess is already in your heart.

Great chapter. Thank you for writing!

Loved the story so much when you wrote it 2 years back it's one of the best fanfic I've ever read even today.

"The one time he'd allowed himself to become entangled with a woman had ended with his heart carved from his chest and his head an empty shell." One of the most remarkable lines I've ever read I remember reading it in the original story.

Anyways love love it just as much as I loved it back then. Your writing skills are remarkable you could write Jerza as molluscs in ocean and it would somehow feel just right.

Thanks for an awesome read:)

P.S. fanfic isn't allowing me to review the story as only one review is allowed per chapter therefore I'm reviewing it as a guest

I need to know who the attacker was!

Again, I commend your research. You paint a convincing image of feudal Japan for me.

I remember the plot in general but not in details and it's a delight to reread an updated version of this story which is one of my favorites from you.