Reviews for L'ébauche
parrillasquinn chapter 3 . 7/14/2018
god i love this is fics, is literally perfect and i really need u update.x
Ghost of Harrenhal chapter 3 . 2/10/2017
GIVE US THE REST OF THE NIGHT PLEASE I WILL BE GRATEFUL FOREVER
Ghost of Harrenhal chapter 1 . 10/5/2016
these levels of snobbish judgement must be the most evil queen-ish any AU regina has ever been lol but they still love each other even if theyre p much just annoying cult pricks
sequoiabuttrfly chapter 3 . 9/13/2016
OK, I'm just going to say that this story needs more. It can't end here on the sofa. It just can't! So please...write more to this story! PLEASE!
sequoiabuttrfly chapter 2 . 9/13/2016
The anticipation is killing me. The conversation, the innocence of flirting with one another. It's absolute torture. The moment she thought he was going to kiss her was simply priceless. This takes me back to the scene when they met a second time in 3B. She wanted him to kiss her then and he didn't. I'm sure this next chapter I'm going to read is going to be well worth being tortured reading the first two!
tiCocoChanelle chapter 3 . 9/10/2016
OMG! I like it! Great!
tiCocoChanelle chapter 1 . 9/10/2016
Okay maybe I'm crazy but I think Lana has already say that "They're always more interesting when they think nobody's looking." when she was playing Trina Decker in Swington, no?
filmyfurry chapter 3 . 7/28/2016
Another wonderful chapter! Their make-out session by the river was so worth the wait. Bless Robin for deciding to wait because the anticipation made it so much hotter. Their conversation at the Cathedral was very intimate for two strangers. To be honest, I find the 'no name' rule kinda pointless after this scene because even though they don't know each other's names, they do know some truths about the other. I really liked how Robin correctly guessed Regina's favourite Delacroix piece. There's something about this part that stood out to me. "Everything about this man is warm, welcoming; he's like a hearth fire made of dimpled smiles and intellectual flirtation, stoked by patience and charm and criminal good looks." - I loved the way you described Robin in this fic. You described him as if he was a painting and it fits very well with the overall premise of the story. Another part that I liked was when Regina wanted to tease Robin about his former profession but instead she hit a sore spot. It was a reminder that they are still strangers to each other. The sex was hot as hell. I loved how turned on they both were.
filmyfurry chapter 2 . 7/26/2016
This was a great chapter! I absolutely adore their conversations at the beginning of the chapter. It was great to get to know them better. I really liked Robin's story as to why he decided to move to Paris. "he has nice teeth, she thinks, and then she wonders who thinks that about someone? Her, apparently." - this train of thought was endearing. Robin is such a smooth-talker. The part where he explained to Regina why he's waiting to kiss her had me melting. Also Robin playing with Regina's hand was so hot. I loved that, at the end of the chapter, Regina made her decision but wanted to play coy in order to make Robin work for it. I live for their flirty banters.
filmyfurry chapter 1 . 7/17/2016
This was a fabulous start to an amazing story! I loved the way you started off the story with Regina's story about cigarettes and her connection to Paris. This made me feel like I've known her for some time instead of just meeting her for the first time in this AU. I do not know most of the paintings that are mentioned so while I was reading through this chapter, I had to google them so I could be more involved in the story. It was worth it though because I now know more about French paintings than I did before. I can relate to Regina's habit of people-watching and I wish there was a good-looking guy to disturb me too, hehe. I loved your descriptions of Robin: "Could melt into some mix of paint and canvas on any of these walls, and nobody would think him out of place." and "the wonder of God's creation standing beside her." They were so great especially the latter. It was cute how Regina pride herself for not being easily charmed but now she can't stop smiling because of him. Robin taking the time to draw her so he can use it as an excuse to talk to her was such a Robin-like thing to do. Robin and Regina's "bedroom talk" about art was so fascinating to me. I mean, I have no idea what they were talking about most of the time but it made me want to know more. I loved that they bonded (and flirted) over art. The ending was wonderful because of all the possibilities it represents.
outlawqueenbey44 chapter 3 . 3/18/2016
I request another chapter! hahahah this is a great story so far!
hevelinchris chapter 3 . 2/6/2016
Thank God! For having your amazing writing and those enormous chapters that I'll never be disappointed to spams time reading. I can't wait for the next update because their hot scene just left me with dry mouth and I'm too excited to read the continuation of it.
Aihsatan-Ellimac chapter 3 . 2/6/2016
Way too hot. Deliciously done. Felt every minute of it. Gosh I want more. It ended so soon. I loved it!
cenewman0 chapter 3 . 2/2/2016
I was sure I'd left you a review already, but I was mistaken! Just dropping in to say how much I love this story. And I so hope you haven't abandoned it (though I'd be equally sad & understanding, since I too have a real life). I would love to see where life takes them next.
TheEvilRose chapter 3 . 1/27/2016
You haven't disappointed again. But now I have too high expectations about my trip to Paris later this year.. Damn you
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