bye “Yasss” you are not a real fan, i am the best reviewer AND i am fanfiction “in the night” by iamrotting’s biggest fan sooo not even any competition. i have been here since 2018 OK AND I AM HER GIRLFRIEND SOOO YEA

Honestly, i think the relationship is quite toxic. Their whole relationship is based on lust, not quite enough love. But surprisingly, the story is more angsty than smutty. And BDSM is a nice touch. (though I am a Shibari person myself, and am not very into the cold and soulless handcuffs play). When Anna says she submitted to Elsa, was more emotionally significant than saying she loves her.

Though i have to admit, i have difficulty understanding the motive of the characters. Sometimes, i feel like they are not being logical, and being very dramatic. You would expect a corporate CEO and 4.0 gpa student would at least be able to think, and not act impulsively.

And 23 years old professor is too far-fetched. No university gives that title to someone that young, no matter how genius they are.

Great writing.
I really love your decision to make everything so realistic. And aside from a few small things, the rest of the story is actually believable. Everything, from the characters’ personalities to the events in the story, just felt real, you know?
Aside from that, this was one hell of an emotional rollercoaster. It’s interesting how you tend to focus more on the darker side of the relationship and its consequences, and I admire you for speaking up about many issues that may be swept under the rug in today’s society. Many of the chapters weren’t exactly pleasant to read, but I think they were valuable nonetheless.
So, thanks for writing this. I do hope you continue writing, especially as Frozen 2 is nearing release.

ok babey we are back in business!
ok I don’t know if I’m being completely STUPID rn or if my memory is literal trash but I’m gonna ask anyways. umm why did anna even start in the first place? like watch me ask this and then it’s answered in the next 5 chapters, of course and then I look like the true idiot of 2019. like I know she went there and Hans was like “sup u come here a lot, u wanna work” and then Anna was like “bruh im underage” and then Hans was like “bruh moment” and then she started a few months later, but I don’t remember much after that...but she wasn’t in debt at the time because she met meg while working? maybe I’m overthinking and either she was just curious or wanted quick money(to pay for college w/o Meg) but like why couldn’t she have gotten a normal job like she said a waitress? she wasn’t under as much pressure at the time. i remember being soooo confused about Anna’s past, at least while she was working, but i never said anything. and i now realize i could’ve just dm’d on discord but 1. making 20 page reviews is literally a habit now and 2. id literally pop off and i don’t want to talk(write?) your ears(eyes?) off

p.s. i was reading that fisherman al Anna whatever the hell her name is fic made in 2016 by elsanna collaborations or something and i was like “damn this is amazing” and i get to the bottom and i see you AND FORKANNA “CONTRIBUTED”? THE LEGEND LITERALLY JUMPED OUT, I WAS SHOCKED
k I’m gonna continue now

I find myself here...once again. The urge is too strong, I have to reread this! I’m too attached to let this baby age without sparing a passing glance
can’t wait to hurt

I read this on Ao3 so many years ago. And I admit it was so complex I didn't and still don't figure out a lot of things. I don't know why, maybe I didn't catch all the terms, and sometimes I forgot and after months re-read some of the chapters because I lost updates. Or maybe it was just I hurried throught it, wanted to know what will happened to them...
But this story remained in my hearts. I remember so much Anna and Elsa feeling and tugs for each others.
The last chapter I read was the graduation and it just felt so wrong, so alienating. It felt like a lie, 'bullshit' I wanted to scream. But it was the last and you didn't update for quite a while and then I forget about it. Not totally. Sometimes I wondered to myself, how their story went. If they worked out, if they got together.
Then, I was looking for some elsanna and I found it on fiction, and one review said "complete". (Blowminding)

I felt the second-last chapter like a waterfall. Those words Elsa finally say to her father.. I felt them so mine, watching myself in the same shoes (no, it's not a tragic situation like that). And that's why I felt a bit "wrong" about Elsa feeling sad in this last one. One of my favourite and remembered moments of this fic will remain when Elsa unlashed on his father (and later on Anna) saying 'I always known I was the bastard in your eyes'. And all the speech. Epic.
I know Anna is the good person, like canon really, the one who loves everyone, but I also was so happy Elsa was finally away and free of him. (A bit of this is always because I seen myself in these two chapters). But when I can forgive Meg, I can't do it for her father.

Coming back a bit, I was so happy to see you choose to let them love each other. Again, reading the graduation chapter and the others after, I had given up on a 'happy ending'. I was so sad seeing Elsa like this, faking like everything was well. I feared you'd choose this ending. Probably for society's sake. Because who would let them together even after their revealig, in a fic so close to the real world?
But you did. And I will always be gratefult for that.
To let Elsa, and not only Anna, accepting all it. The love Anna has for her, the one she feels and the fact they want to stay together. And going fully on it. Going on and saying things like living together and forever, and I will stay with you. It warms my heart.
And the anger of their parents, it's so much the society's anger who don't want to see it wasn't their fault, it was just love. (And not the crazy-possessive-love, i-kill-you-for-love, poison love). It was something real and wonderful for the both of them.
So thank you from the bottom of my heart for this conclusion, (and) to have it concluded.
My mind could rest at peace now..!
Yes, I know life isn't all sunshine and rainbows, and their ending it's not like that, but the fact the two of them are together, it is more than I could imagine..!
Thank you again for everything, congratulations and all the best luck in the world

- an happy reader

I cannot fathom the likes and attention this story has gotten. The dialog is stunted and feels very forced with little to no direction to speak of. There is no establishment of why Anna is dancing other than thay she owes money. To whom does she owe money? If it is as the story sort of hints at and is simply for student loans there are other and better ways. The tags are also confusing as Anna and Elsa do not seem to be related goeing by the first three chapters. I may try to read more to see if it improves but so far there is no hook and no plot.

why was I on ao3 literally in the dark about the ending of this story I’m literally blessed

I can’t even begin to comprehend how amazing this fic is(and I also love all of your writing, and you’re definitely my favorite author right now). I can’t even put into words how much your writing has affected me and idk this sounds weird but it actually helps me get through my days. There’s obviously not as many fics, stories, fanart etc. in the frozen community as there was even like 3 years ago and as disheartening as that is, I’m really glad you’re still here and writing for us(and yourself..?)! I’ve loved a lot of fan fictions that has to do with Frozen but never in all my like 3-4 years of reading them, have I ever actually loved an authors’ writing so much that I branched out to their other stories. I started w/ Learn To Love Again(I think it’s the name, I haven’t read it in so long), and since I was waiting for it to be updated, I went to this fic. Believe me when I say it is one of the best(because this was an amazing fic and it actually brought me back into reading your stuff again) and also worst choice(literally so much angst and heartache) I ever made..? Seriously I only have good things to say about it/your writing(except that I get your fics mixed up because you really have your own style but that’s a me problem)! I’ve not finished this yet but I’ll be back in 15 minutes bawling my eyes out and praising it! Thank you so much

You should do a part 2 to this story

Anna Summers? Isn’t her last name Anderson?

It doesn't sound like the end to me.

This is the end? IS IT the end? OMG this feels so surreal...this emptiness, like when a story you love finally ends. I'm so glad it ends on a good note, yes! Bravo for finishing this piece, thank you! I need to reread it again, and again, until Frozen 2 comes out. Thank you... T_T

Looks like another hurdle they need to overcome.

Keep up the hard work

a round of closure for everyone! thank you for this story!

Well darn,

That's it. What an ending, I live in the idea that Elsa got closure, and that Megs text was not a white lie. Thanks a lot for all the hard work on this story, I loved it.