felt like I couldn't breathe so sad

:'{

Sad noises shall ensue

this is such a good story really brings out the sadness in me the dialog is perfect but the end of the story you shouldn't have end it with beep

Wow this really was sad.

:'(

Thats a sad story.

It would've been more poignant if you didn't end what would be an otherwise excellent story, with
beeeeep. It was almost comical.

Sincerely Alexander almeida.

It is so sad and good job on the story