I love this story that I read it again

This was very well written and I enjoyed the tragic aspect in it, but I feel it would’ve been more believable had Kageyama’s suicide not been so rushed. The way you built up to Hinata’s death should’ve been what was done with Kageyama. He moved to quickly and his death felt too rushed. It was like “here’s the build up BOOM character death, BAM ANOTHER ONE”...if that makes sense. Also, sorry if this sounds too critical, I’m in a creative writing course and I’m physically incapable of leaving normal comments anymore, heh.

We'll that ended me. This is soooo great! Please write more

I SCREAMING. WHAT DO YOU MEAN HINATAS DEAD. WHAT DO YOU MEAN KAGS JUMPED OFF A BRIDGE IN RESPONSE. Im sobbing and screaming and this is horrible. Of course, why did I limit the genre to tragedy anyway? I like causing myself emotional pain evidently. This is a great fic and thank you so much for writing it! I'm sobbing

*GINORMOUS WATERFALL* LIKE TEARS NON STOP! UUUUUUUUUGGGGGGHHHHHH! I loved it but OMG SO SAD! Btw I may be a little over dramatic. But still it's sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo sad!

Self harm is stupid. Thank you for ruining Hinata's character.

Aaaaah! Why? Why did that beautifully written fanfiction have to end so tragically? Aaah!

*cries* H-help..

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOooooooo /sob sob
im cryin dude
fuck
you
my bbies
damn
but bless you