Waiting... Next cap.

Reread this story again, hope is eternal for an update

Pobre Jon.
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Poor Jon.

This story is made of pure awesome! I am delighted and fascinated and totally in awe of what you have created here. I first began to read this fic expecting some entertaining crack and some fix-it of canon unkind events. And a better Sansa, too. But you gave me so much more than that! Your future!Sansa has something incredible going here, with her quests and her inspiring of her brothers into find their own awesomeness inside themselves as well as how people respond to them and to her. I love how the North is changing thanks to your Sansa and how many interesting things are being unveiled in those lands cause of Sansa's projects. The scientific theories and discoveries are simply astounding. I am giddy just reading about them! So many fascinating theories to play with! So many bunny ideas to explore in my mind! I love all your Sansa's plans. I also love Jon's deeds in King's Landing. The weirdtrees issue was so very interesting to read! I am fascinated by the northern old religious beliefs and the magic and the myth lore surrounding it. You gave me so much of it all here! And Jon being given the chance to play the ruler and judge in the capitol was most satisfactory. He singlehandedly disposed of some of the more dangerous enemies to Stark House in canon! I am most curious about how canon will diverge now on, Sansa having influenced so many changes already. I cannot but pray your muse will return to you soon because this story thoroughly deserves to be continued on and certainly completed. Very good work, you! And thank you for writing and posting this so very enjoyable fic. Take care and have a good week!

This story is very interesting, but you NEED to use articles in front of nouns. You occasionally do use “a” in front of nouns, but you never use “the” and it makes your paragraphs sound more like a list of bullet points than a story. It sounds like a rough draft. At first I thought English might not be your first language which would make it completely understandable, but your profile says USA. So basically, it just seems lazy, why should the readers invest our time in reading and reviewing if the writer isn’t willing to even EDIT their chapters? Because even just reading over chapters once before posting would help you catch these errors.i wouldn’t have brought it up if you only did it once or twice a chapter, but you seem to do it multiple times a paragraph! It’s a shame, because the story is otherwise very well thought out and obviously well-researched, so you DO care. I’d highly recommend looking up the purpose of articles in grammar.

Love this chapter and the rest of the story. I am very much looking to the next one

I'm still reading the story. While completely au, it is fun to find out what crazy discoveries you made up for them this chapter.
You do a decent job of fitting 'modern Sansa' in her time. (except that time scales for development are way of, but GoT years are weird anyway.
While it goes against my principles to read Sansa* bash stories you do not really focus on that, and it is a good plot to replace the character without adding 'yet another Stark child'.

*While I can see why people can dislike her, I think that between her personality, her education and her circumstances she had little room for different choices. Also, I feel Grr Martin/TVshow deliberately kept her in ever worsening similar roles so he would not need another character for that role.

you have a habit of forgetting to put 'the' in the sentences. Other than that, great story.

omg really? Stark Industries? Where's Iron Man when you need his snark?

Great story loved it.

shit, sorry about that, did not see the end notes yet XD

so are you gonna erased the magic in westeros/essos, since the quagmire more of a scientific phenomenon than a magical one?

This story is delightful! I hope you will work on it some more, as it is so quirky and funny- a rarity in this fandom

wow what a read wow wow love it!

when scientific technology is presented to pre-industrial society they will think magic .If you say " because science" they will think magic anyway .Then when it IS magic they know its magic so its all magic lol