I really love this story! It’s making me anxious on what’s going to happen next, my favorite pair is obviously the greens, something about them just makes them so badass(ofc they are lol) and so adventurous! I hope this story will update soon, this quarantine is making me wanna read lol! Excited to see what happens next

Okay I purposely waited until they were all introduced, let's start:
The Girls - I think you've gone a very unique route with them and you're pulling it off brilliantly. Bubbles is broken, so is Bunny, I know how hard it is to get into that kind of element and it's kinda creepy which just means you're nailing it. I have a feeling Blossom and Berserk are actually switched, so I'll wait to see the actual clever one between us lol. BC is naturally my least favorite puff but she's badass here so props

Brick - Need the story between him and Blaster to properly judge him but he's a strong character so far.

Butch - This is as Butch as he gets in every PPG fanfic, overused and I find him kinda predictable.

Boomer - The smol bean lol. I like him, in fanfics on this site he's either a complete idiot or an unnecessary loner. You've got his personality buttoned down here.

Blaster - I'll be frank, his name sucks. It's a serious pet peeve anytime I'm reading through the story. What annoys me the most is that he's downright the best Bunny counterpart OC I've read in any story on here, you've managed to discern his personality from his brothers perfectly. But seriously, his name is horrible lol.

Another pet peeve of mine is you calling Butch a brunette when he has black hair. You mentioned it upon his appearance so I don't know where the brunette came from.

Other than that, Awesome story.

Please update it's really really good.

Awwwww that's sucks, Bloss. I'm in love with this. But hey, so Bunnys in Mojos dungeon, Blossom is impersonating as Breserk, Buttercup is part of a gang, and Bubbles bought by Butch and sold to Boomer?

why don't i ever review damn it? Just like your other fan fictions, this one creates so many questions in my mind .This story really intrigues me, i can't wait to know what happens next

I LOVE IT! I'm basically excited for Butch and Buttercup, because they're my favorite pairing, but I love the tease of Blossom and Brick together. especially this chapter (love Blossom's POV). I sometimes get confused with Blaster added but that's fine. Bubbles and Boomer are cute too, like how they're both twisted. I love how your chapters are so long and hope that you update fast! I would like to point out, howevever that you exchange "sins" for "since". Better right that down.

GREEEEEEEEEEN PLEASEEEEE

Uh, I dont get it. I dont recognize this BUttercup from the previous Chapters. Did I miss something ?

Such a great chapter! Looking forward to more!

Awesome chap.

OH man. It is getting interesting, and you seems to have the story all planned in your head.

I really wonder what the deal is...

Great chapter, this is my new favorite story! :)

Awesome chapter

So much drama! I think I'm addicted to it. . .

This is such a great story! I'm really glad you decided to share your amazing idea with us. Looking forward to the next chapter.

P.S. Good luck with your book .