Reviews for Don't Get In His Way
luffy0810 chapter 10 . 4/30
when jinbe joins the crew will you add another chapter for him because these are so adorable. i would love if there was one for him.
AgentBeca chapter 12 . 2/21
Aww this is aweosme! Can you do a Jimbi one please? He’s part of the crew now, I wanna read his reaction to fisherman trying to take Luffys head or something similar
Zaraih chapter 12 . 8/18/2019
I enjoyed this, thanks for sharing!
VampireApple chapter 12 . 2/5/2019
This is amazing. I love the loyalty and dedication they all have to Luffy, and the trust that he has in them. I like how Luffy kinda assures them that he still has faith in them.

Holy crap, the chapter where they rescue him though! Amazing! Their anger and violent response- just beautiful!

This last one, I adore it. Like, Law and Leo being protective. What I really liked was that little bit at the end, with Law and the Straw Hats. The fact that they're always looking out for him, even when it doesn't seem like it.

I'm not usually one to make suggestions, but I think it'd be really neat if you did another fic, from Luffy's perspective, protecting the crew from a danger they're unaware of, like Sanji's chapter, or taking care of them in other ways.

This is a beautiful fic, thank you for writing and sharing!
Moonlight Blue Rose chapter 10 . 9/3/2018
I absolutely LOVE your story! The anime and manga need more nakamaship moments and One Piece is a really fascinating story but after the time-skip didn't have any moments like this or how Luffy feels about Ace... death.(T.T)
But first: Robin's words "They TOUCHED him", I shivered when I read it! They hurt Straw-Hats' Light so~ they are not going to get away~!(sadistic laugh) And the crew's reaction! The marines didn't know what hit them(HAHAHAHAHA)
Because you thouch their buddle of joy, you get eight Straw-Hats teaching you a... lesson.
Second: Zoro was like: marines, marines, marines, oh look, the door.(That was hilarious)
Third: Chopper and Usopp's reaction when seeing Luffy. Oh, and the 'sring cleaning' with their smirks afterwards. Why this is not canon?
Fourth:The crew's faces when they took in Luffy's condition and then the fun started~(chuckling evilly)
Fifth: Saying that it is Luffy's fault that Ace died? That Lu is fighting on a whim? That just crossed the line. Really some people don't get it. Never looking at Luffy for Luffy himself but just for the bounty. In the anime people are the same. They never understood Luffy. So... they need to be tought not to make this mistake again. Nobody hurts Lu and gets away with it.(Sigh) But I just don't know how people can even think about(of?) hurting Luffy.
Sixth:"That's what you get for taking our captain" Fufufu, now I can see Sabo doing this too. Now, I think the world got the hint.
So, awesome fic, love it and by the way school sucks. I have gotta go again soon. But it's so soooooon.(Sigh) Well, we gotta live. :( But your fic makes me feel better. XD
Zon Yokai Blade of the Spirits chapter 12 . 4/16/2018
Man that was a good chapter, this is actually my third time reading this one-shot collection you have and it always drives home the sense of loyalty and family that One Piece instills. If you could I'd ask you to take a look at the manga/anime Fairy Tail, to me it's one of the greatest of this time and just like One Piece is very family driven. I think you could make a really good one-shot collection from that series because I always get good feels from this one. Let me know what you think and have fun with the next Bonus chapter, maybe have it deal with Vivi next.
Anoneme chapter 9 . 4/7/2018
You know what? You did something perfect here. Hawkeye has a sword necklace thing he used to fight Zoro the first time they met, now Zoro has his own to use on small fry. :3

The parallels are absolutely perfect!
Wragziez chapter 12 . 2/26/2018
Really enjoyed reading this, thank you very much for sharing such a fantastic story!
ESpiritualHealer chapter 1 . 11/28/2017
My emotions. Really Nice.
Sesshomarusama3 chapter 12 . 9/25/2017
This fic is the absolute best! I love each one, and the one with law and Leo near the end had my heart going! Great fic dear!
SeventhAssassin chapter 12 . 8/27/2017
Make another chapter for Sabo because I want to read how much an overprotective brother could do, with strawhats or not I don't really care. I also wanted to read how to make the strawhats crew feel a chill that would mark in the deepest of their mind to never ever mess with Luffy when the older brother is around too like what you did to this this bonus chapter, that would be humorous. Sigh, how I wish Ace is still alive because that's an interesting to see, overprotective duo brothers. Great fanfic by the way, totally love it.
Asuka1920 chapter 12 . 3/9/2017
More chapters!
creativesm75 chapter 12 . 12/30/2016
cool
RRina chapter 9 . 9/22/2016
Oh! I like this chapter so much. I can see the deep loyalty of Zoro to his captain. He's always Luffy's shield and protector. I love those part of him so much. Besides, I laughed out loud when I read that bounty hunter asked Zoro for help them with the word " You joined the crew for that purpose? (for capture his captain?) You were a pirate hunter, after all" Oi! Wait! That idiot didn't know or something? Zoro was the very first one who joined with this crew. If he wanted to capture pirate with that plan he'd better for infamous pirate more than Luffy at those time. What about those idiot guy expect. So, I was glad very much when Zoro's really angry and take care all of them. And I love when He said "Don't get in my captain's way." It's really suit with his way. Last, Thanks for your sharing.
takedigi chapter 12 . 8/19/2016
I liked the bonus. That's interesting. When I read the technique of Law, "Room" I knew this was going to be interesting.

I loved every chapter of this fic.
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