How is this better writing than the last jedi...

Great story. Really enjoyed it. Thanks for writing!

Absolutely loved this story, thank you for sharing it with us! :)

Great story!

Awesome story!

I loved this story. I loved the development of Reylo and Ben's redemption. Although I would have liked to see more of been and good mother dealing with things I just loved the journey!

This was so good. I loved your Kylo Ren! He was powerful, but he didn't try to smother Rey. I also liked how you ended it. Everything isn't wrapped up so neatly that it's unrealistic, but it's still a happy ending. Thank you so much for sharing this with us. I really enjoyed it. You are a very talented

mean bird bat things.. could of jsut not let her on her ship but NOOO

poor luke and his ships... he really has crap luck with them landing in water

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This was so beautiful! I’m sad it’s over but I loved the relationships and how well you stuck to the characters canon personalities.

Loved your realistic view of Kylo Ren and Rey in the story. Hopefully something like this happens in the last movie where he turns against the first order because he wants to be with Rey and nobody else.

This is incredible! Thanks so much for sharing this with us!

Thank you!

Love love love this keep up the update but take your time with it

oh dear

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Love this work I'll be reading some more update soon but take your time on the update